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Jessye (marchintothesea)
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Member Since 04/15/2008
Last Online 09/04/2008
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About Myself: I am a 16 year old girl and I have a passion for writing. Most of what I post here will be descriptions and random "practice" work that I have done for school, so please know that most of my work here are not "real" stories. Hopefully, I will someday complete a full length novel, but for now I'm happy to write a few little stories :)
Besides writing, I like drawing, hot tea, parties, videogames, deep conversations and Nerf guns. I dislike bigots, itchy sweaters, deadlines, traffic jams and disgruntled cats.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jun 20, 2008AnotherPoetry 92
Jun 15, 2008Last Chance with a FriendMiscellaneous Stories 98
Jun 15, 2008Flying Free: A MemoirNon-Fiction 126
Jun 13, 2008LiarsPoetry 76
Jun 13, 2008My Sister's Wedding DressMiscellaneous Stories 137
Jun 13, 2008Ode to ImperiumNon-Fiction 95

Comments

Total number of comments: 10

Title article: When I'm Alone...
Date: 2008-06-21 07:47:14

I honestly think that you could develop this into something more. Right now, it isn't really a story. You could write about how the person hit rock bottom, what they do now, how they plan to get out, etc.

Title article: Suicide
Date: 2008-06-21 07:25:21

I liked this quite a bit. Everyone does feel like this sometimes, even though most people don't go and do it. I'm sorry about your girlfriend though. You deserve way better.

Title article: Let Us Pray
Date: 2008-06-20 21:44:25

The line about the soldiers made me think of the Iraq war... so tragic. Your poems are always so full of emotion and they make me think about the more unfortunate aspects of our society. This one was impressive as always.

Title article: My First Experience on a High School Bus
Date: 2008-06-20 21:34:58

The idea behind the story is amusing, but the story was too wordy and schizophrenic.

Title article: Flying Free: A Memoir
Date: 2008-06-15 19:02:40

Haha yeahh it's not very exciting. Don't worry about it.

Title article: Your Love is Like a Battery
Date: 2008-06-15 17:43:12

I like this poem a lot. It's short and sweet and the lines fit together perfectly.

Title article: Liars
Date: 2008-06-13 20:49:14
Last Line
The last line is "Another one fallen from grace."

Title article: Broken heart and shattered dreams
Date: 2008-06-13 15:33:42

I really liked this. I loved  
the rhymes and it was a great tragic love poem.

Title article: Flower In A Vase
Date: 2008-06-13 15:13:42

Wow... intense. I know nothing about poems but I love the way that you rhyme. It's rhythmic and cool.

Title article: I Pledge Allegiance
Date: 2008-06-13 15:09:05
Wow
Excellent topic, absolutely true and well written. Amazing :)

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