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Brooke (SageSyren)
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Member Since 04/15/2008
Last Online 09/18/2008
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Website/Blog: www.storywrite.com/SageSyren
About Myself: Also try http://thefourbreazeales.blogspot.com/ This is my family website.

I was gone, now I'm back. Decided I liked this place and missed it.

I'm a hearth and nature witch. I love to laugh and have fun.

All comment are welcome and any help you can give in puncation and dialogue tags would be greatly appreciated.

For the future....thanks

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Jul 11, 2008Closer Raisa, Chapter 3Mystery 96
Jul 10, 2008Closer Raisa, Chapter 2Mystery 130
Jul 9, 2008Closer Raisa; the beginning, Chapter 1Mystery 126

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Title article: Just Wait...
Date: 2008-07-10 14:55:31

What a great message. For one person to walk away there will be three more who will stay and bring a smile to your face and it doesn't just have to a man.  
Chin up. :)

Title article: Sand Castle
Date: 2008-07-10 11:42:19

Wow!! That was longggg... But well worth the time to read it. 
Very enjoyable.

Title article: She
Date: 2008-07-10 11:28:25

I am so very sad. What a terrible thing to happen three people, the girl, the baby and the mother. 
 
Just breaks my heart. But this was so very well written. Such emotion.

Title article: Alliance of Minds (part two)
Date: 2008-07-10 11:10:42
Loved it
Loved the twist at the end. I really wasn't imagining that. I figured he was so talented that they would want to keep and train him.  
Wow

Title article: The Article
Date: 2008-07-09 13:14:15

Awesome write. Most of the time when we see through a murders eyes it's twisted, but this was really good. 
 
Bravo (if this site gave out claps you'd have three)

Title article: Awakening of Minds (Part One)
Date: 2008-07-09 12:50:58
Good
You are very wordy. Not that that's a bad thing, so am I. This was great on descriptions and very enjoyable to read. 
 
Will be looking forward to reading the next installment.

Title article: How To Lose Weight And Make Friends With Proper Diet.
Date: 2008-07-08 14:18:37
good
Felt like the TV was on and I was up wayyyy toooo late. Info mercial all the way. 
 
Had a friend who threw up all the time. Spent six months in a mental hospital trying to figure out why she did it. Never did find out. We lost track. 
 
Anyways, thought it was funny. Just hope no one takes this as serious.

Title article: Found In Space
Date: 2008-04-28 09:12:58

Very funny. I wish I could write humor *cries* 
 
Anyways Dan this was very funny. I do wonder if the universe exploded. :)

Title article: I'm The Pirate!
Date: 2008-04-28 08:59:10
Powerful
Powerful message you've written about here. 
 
My only suggestion would be to show not tell. And to use the five senses more.  
 
Great write.

Title article: Rotting Away
Date: 2008-04-24 09:49:53

Interesting. I like to know how he cleaned up the apartment if he was a ghost :)

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