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Brooke (SageSyren)
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Member Since 04/15/2008
Last Online 08/11/2008
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Website/Blog: www.storywrite.com/SageSyren
About Myself: Also try http://thefourbreazeales.blogspot.com/ This is my family website.

I was gone, now I'm back. Decided I liked this place and missed it.

I'm a hearth and nature witch. I love to laugh and have fun.

All comment are welcome and any help you can give in puncation and dialogue tags would be greatly appreciated.

For the future....thanks

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 11, 2008Closer Raisa, Chapter 3Mystery 74
Jul 10, 2008Closer Raisa, Chapter 2Mystery 94
Jul 9, 2008Closer Raisa; the beginning, Chapter 1Mystery 98

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Title article: Why I Don't Write Romance
Date: 2008-04-24 09:11:23
OMG
Stay away from romance. You slashed it all to hell. 
*laughs* 
I loved this.

Title article: Confessions in the produce aisle
Date: 2008-04-23 12:38:47
OMG
The ending was hilarious. Loved it

Title article: Panties: A Romance Ruined
Date: 2008-04-23 10:08:24
Hahahaha
I laughed so hard through the whole thing and I don't think I was suppose to. *blushes* Very funny

Title article: The Chat from Hell
Date: 2008-04-22 09:42:25

How creepy!!! Remind me never to talk to someone in real time.

Title article: never
Date: 2008-04-22 09:24:57

Doesn't sound like a dog to me. If it was a dog wouldn't they have put fur and not hair.  
 
Sounds like a tragic accident happened and they lost someone they loved. 
 
Nice start. Would love to hear what happened before this part.

Title article: Im In Love with My BestFriend
Date: 2008-04-21 13:14:29

Those are the best. Friends first, lovers second. Today most of us do things backwards. *sighs* I had a friend like this. Wonder what he is doing today?

Title article: Nightmare
Date: 2008-04-21 13:00:42

You need to continue with this. It's a really good start. Am curious to find at what Michael is.

Title article: Fancy Fantasy
Date: 2008-04-21 12:44:24

Even being married I still feel like this lot of the time.  
Sorry this happened to you. Made for a great short story though.

Title article: Grotesque
Date: 2008-04-21 12:30:05

This was really good, but I wonder if there could have been more showing instead of telling.

Title article: Sword of Olivia
Date: 2008-04-21 11:57:38
I agree
I agree with Scott. This should be longer. I love mythology.

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