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Brooke (SageSyren)
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Website/Blog: www.storywrite.com/SageSyren
About Myself: I was gone, now I'm back. Decided I liked this place and missed it.

I'm a hearth and nature witch. I love to laugh and have fun. But watch my temper, I am a Leo.

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Title article: Nightmare
Date: 2008-04-21 13:00:42

You need to continue with this. It's a really good start. Am curious to find at what Michael is.

Title article: Richards bad day
Date: 2008-04-21 12:55:33

Hahahaha, could have been me *grin*

Title article: Fancy Fantasy
Date: 2008-04-21 12:44:24

Even being married I still feel like this lot of the time.  
Sorry this happened to you. Made for a great short story though.

Title article: Grotesque
Date: 2008-04-21 12:30:05

This was really good, but I wonder if there could have been more showing instead of telling.

Title article: Who's Teaching Whom (Part Two)
Date: 2008-04-21 12:19:21

Again a good one. Look forward to number three

Title article: Who's Teaching Whom (Part One)
Date: 2008-04-21 12:16:19

Very humorous, but I'm not sure it was suppose to be. I saw you have another of this up and I will head over to read that one. 
 
My only suggestion would be to reread this out loud. A couple of misspelled words, like there instead of their.

Title article: Sword of Olivia
Date: 2008-04-21 11:57:38
I agree
I agree with Scott. This should be longer. I love mythology.

Title article: Something Spicy
Date: 2008-04-21 11:46:07

I couldn't stop laughing. You got more like this? :)

Title article: My hell
Date: 2008-04-21 11:39:35

Very descriptive. I loved it. My only suggestion would be to break up the long paragraph into smaller one. :)

Title article: Christmas of the Dead
Date: 2008-04-21 11:30:33

*shivers* I will never be able to remember christmas the same way again. :) Great job

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