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Member Since	04/14/2008
Last Online	10/06/2008
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Website/Blog:

www.jessenovels.wordpress.com

About Myself:

Ello, ello. My name is Jesse Abundis, I'm 23 years old, and I've been writing ever since I was 16. I haven't come to Storieville alone. I've brought CTK with me. Another fantastic writer, I know you'll love.

Here's the run down of the projects I'm working on and CTK is working on as well.

Jesse's Projects
- L.N.S.A ( NOVEL)
- 3-Way ( Sketch Comedy)

CTK Projects
- The Beholder
- Cook You

I'm on myspace, facebook, and I have my own site. I'm looking for Indie Writers to promote on my site, so go ahead and drop an e-mail with your story and I'll take a look. I can't promise that everyone that sends a story will be promoted.

Your Friend
Jesse

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 3, 2008	False Security	Miscellaneous Stories	82
Aug 9, 2008	L.N.S.A CH 2.2	Adventure	78
Aug 6, 2008	3-way # 5	Humor	232
Aug 1, 2008	Cook You	Humor	189
Jul 6, 2008	L.N.S.A Chapter 2	Adventure	122
Jul 1, 2008	3-way #4	Humor	157
Jun 11, 2008	LNSA CH 1.2, Chapter 2	Adventure	172
Jun 11, 2008	3-way # 3	Humor	415
Jun 3, 2008	LNSA, Chapter 1	Adventure	138
May 10, 2008	3-way #2	Humor	369
Apr 26, 2008	The Beholder	Miscellaneous Stories	352
Apr 14, 2008	LNSA {Prologue}, Chapter 0	Adventure	264
Apr 14, 2008	3-way	Humor	477

Comments

Total number of comments: 14

Title article: Hearts Cry Out
Date: 2008-09-03 17:12:38

Good work
A nice poem, that rhymed well. I love the last part at the end, truer words could have not been spoken. I enjoy the way, you talk about love, life and death. Keep up the good work.

Title article: image
Date: 2008-08-09 20:49:37

I will have to agree with Pookerdoo, it was kinda strange, and I was finding it hard to understand, but in the end, it ws still made for a good read keep it up.

Title article: The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-08 21:24:48

Well Done
Marvelously written. The account of the story is just captivating, and leave the reader seeking more to this tale. Having this ex-veteran describe the ordeal is just stunning. And, I’m proud to announce this story and the rest of the chapters will be promoted on my site. It’s the least I can do.

Your Friend
Jesse

Title article: 1961
Date: 2008-07-28 20:08:24

Good one
A very nice read, you got the reader pulled in on the first paragraph. The entire story itself keeps the reader attention, and nice twist in the end. You can’t help but feel sorry for the character going through this whole ordeal. Keep up the good work.

Your Friend
Jesse

Title article: gone was the girl
Date: 2008-07-28 19:53:27

Very nice
A good poem that speaks from the heart and personal experience. Showing how a girl changes into a woman, it’s very well describe in the second paragraph. There’s no doubt you have good talent, so keep up the good work.

Your Friend
Jesse

Title article: Secret Wars
Date: 2008-07-05 22:32:54

Good read
Not bad, great title. This was a cross between a Military style story, but, turned into a poem. That's something new to me, still makes a good read. So keep the good work.

Your Friend
Jesse

Title article: Tired Avenue Dirkin/Anna Devine
Date: 2008-07-05 20:59:08

Very nice
It's good to see a joint poem, we should see more of storiesville users doing this. Love the poem you guys worked on. Bravo, Dirkin and Anna Devine.

From your friend
Jesse

Title article: Ouch
Date: 2008-07-04 23:27:53

Oh Lemon
Nice, very nice. You've out did yourself in the 3-way forum, now in poetry DAMN YOU LEMON, those you talent know no bound. Keep up the good work.

Title article: I'm Just Me
Date: 2008-07-04 23:15:33

I agree ATOM
I agree with that, the first part just hooked you in. The last part was okay, I think it just needed more emotion, to leave people breathless.

Title article: I'm Just Me
Date: 2008-07-04 23:04:58

It's a good poem
I think it's a good poem, you wrote what you felt. And that's what poetry is about. The first part half was very strong, and it did fade away in the end.

But, you should not listen to Elenalda. You have to keep writing, no matter what. That's what storiesville is about, allowing writers to post their work no matter what.

Keep up the good work

Your Friend
Jesse.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
07/02/2008 22:46:50	3-way for the people of Storiesville.com	Off-Topic	914
06/24/2008 20:38:30	30 Chapters, 30 Writers of Storiesville.com	Off-Topic	448
08/03/2008 17:30:15	Favorite Graphic Novel	Off-Topic	1452
07/05/2008 21:19:37	Ideas To Improve Storiesville	Off-Topic	1470
08/03/2008 15:10:13	Join, Fantasy Football League	Off-Topic	88
07/09/2008 00:37:18	L.N.S.A	Off-Topic	348
07/18/2008 01:48:46	Plug Your Work	Off-Topic	259
07/02/2008 23:13:45	Re:3-way for the people of Storiesville.com	Off-Topic	914
07/02/2008 23:10:14	Re:3-way for the people of Storiesville.com	Off-Topic	914
07/02/2008 23:06:39	Re:3-way for the people of Storiesville.com	Off-Topic	914

Connection

jesse (jesse2008)'s connections

Amie Kerlin (lemon)

Mugen (Dirkin)

Jessica S,A. (Forsaken)

D.A. Ross (D.A. Ross)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

CARMEN WRIGHT (20CARMEN_NiCOLE11)

Billy (Vango)

Guestbook

Name	Entry
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 08/06/2008 10:19:36 you win the underoos! haha
Amie Kerlin (lemon)	Created On: 08/04/2008 22:04:52 you seem to have disappeared off the face of the earth. its because i'm 56 isn't it
Amie Kerlin (lemon) where's my lasso of truth?	Created On: 08/03/2008 19:25:23 Damn, I SO need a wonderwoman err.. wonderlemon picture you just want to see my underoos haha! remember those? Feedback from jesse (jesse2008): I do LOL
Amie Kerlin (lemon) the fruit basket	Created On: 08/02/2008 14:51:37 nope 'lemons are pretty good' hehe. Feedback from jesse (jesse2008): are you sure? Oh, okay, I'll take your word on it.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 07/07/2008 18:41:45 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/07/2008 18:41:56 oy! where's the 3 way at? hmm...what about a 4 way, or 6 way. fuck, why dont you just make an orgy? Feedback from jesse (jesse2008): no, no, no. 4-way is just wrong, a 3-way is the way to go.
Billy (Vango)	Created On: 07/05/2008 13:35:08 I've been meaning to sign your guestbook for awhile now. I really love your stories, They're really hilarious.