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Daniel (thickblueline)
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About Myself: I'm a new writer, looking for feedback. I enjoy writing short stories, but novel writing is my passion. Now if I can just stick with one long enough to finish it. I'm a police officer, if you couldn't tell by my username, so I write about what I know. Thanks for reading

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 14, 2008Rookie, Chapter 9Miscellaneous Stories 24
Oct 7, 2008Alpha and OmegaMiscellaneous Stories 70
Oct 2, 2008A Killer in the HouseMiscellaneous Stories 84
Oct 1, 2008A Mothers' LifeMiscellaneous Stories 100
Sep 28, 2008Rookie, Chapter 8Miscellaneous Stories 81
Sep 27, 2008Rookie, Chapter 7Miscellaneous Stories 52
Sep 26, 2008Rookie, Chapter 6Miscellaneous Stories 58
Sep 23, 2008Rookie, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 72
Sep 14, 2008Rookie, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 77
Sep 13, 2008Rookie, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 65
Sep 11, 2008Rookie, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 97
Sep 9, 2008Jack Harker and the Ring of Merlin, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 58
Sep 8, 2008Jack Harker and the Ring of Merlin, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 73
Aug 27, 2008Respite from hellHorror 120
Aug 26, 2008The EmissaryScience Fiction 143
Aug 19, 2008Rookie, Chapter OneMiscellaneous Stories 98
Jun 3, 2008Traffic JammedMiscellaneous Stories 200
May 24, 2008I'm the TerroristMiscellaneous Stories 264
May 10, 2008The Adventures of Phil, the Styrofoam Coffee CupHumor 240
May 3, 2008Hostile Addictions CH. 2. part oneMiscellaneous Stories 162
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Title article: You Want What?
Date: 2008-09-28 16:32:35
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This was great. I loved the carefree attitude of the clerk and how the guy didn't even know what he wanted. Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed the ending.

Title article: Love Crawls Down the Drain
Date: 2008-09-28 00:53:52
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This was a rollercoaster. At first I felt sorry for the guy. Then I thought it might be a dream when all the spiders started crawling around. Then I just felt sorry for him again. Nice bit of writing

Title article: Acorns Don't Fall Far
Date: 2008-09-28 00:47:02
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I liked this. It brought a smile to my face. You described the characters without a bit of dialogue and brought them to life masterfully. The ending was priceless.

Title article: Gone
Date: 2008-09-28 00:42:27
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Sad. Enrapturing. Everything I belive you intended for it to be. Good writing. It started on a sad note, rose up and then plunged the reader back down with the character

Title article: ELIZA AND BETH.
Date: 2008-09-27 18:12:38
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I liked this. You really got a lot done with the characterization and the way the characters interacted with each other. Nice job on foreshadowing too.

Title article: What Goes Around. . . Well, You Know The Rest
Date: 2008-09-27 18:07:37
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I couldn't help but kinda laugh at this story. As a police officer I always feel good when I see people get their just comeuppance. The way you tied everything together was well done

Title article: Existentialist mime story
Date: 2008-09-27 17:46:30
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I really liked this. It held me in a way that I really didn't think that it would. You brought your characters to life with just a few short sentences. That's something that only a good writer has the ability to do.

Title article: Run Katy Run
Date: 2008-09-26 18:26:28
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Disturbing. Violent. Sadistic. All the things that you were apparently shooting for. The last paragraph alone was a real shocker and left me with a sick feeling in my gut

Title article: Suggestion
Date: 2008-09-26 18:21:45
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Well done. You sound like somebody who is familiar with the pitfalls of anorexia and the websites out there claiming that it's okay. That it's normal.

Title article: You Can't Get There From Here
Date: 2008-09-23 00:50:49
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You hit the nail on the head. Sometimes I work in police dispatch. You would not believe the things that some people call the police for. I had a guy call 911 because his water heater was broken.

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