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Last Online	07/09/2008
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Website/Blog:	member.mibba.com/45421/
About Myself:	Have you ever held something you've always wanted to share? A dark side to your personality, buried deep down within yourself, locked away in that treasure chest of nightmares. Have you ever seen the world's darker, more sinister side. The side that is shrouded in shadow, where monsters lurk and people suffer. This is the world that we live in, and I will try to show it to you...

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Jul 5, 2008	The Darkness of Daylight	Horror	94
Jul 2, 2008	The Spark	Poetry	50
Jun 26, 2008	Fantasies	Poetry	75
Jun 26, 2008	Today	Poetry	76
Jun 17, 2008	Lonesome	Poetry	58
Jun 16, 2008	True Vampires	Poetry	59
Jun 11, 2008	The Fool	Poetry	391
Jun 10, 2008	Johnny and his Pigeons	Poetry	127
Jun 6, 2008	The Parting of the Eyes	Horror	101
Jun 4, 2008	The Unwinding of that Eternal Bond	Poetry	58
May 30, 2008	Flavours	Poetry	92
May 30, 2008	The Reaper	Poetry	492
May 20, 2008	The Grass is Greener	Poetry	486
Apr 8, 2008	The Padded Room	Horror	428
Apr 6, 2008	The Mirror	Horror	641

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Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
04/09/2008 00:48:41	Re:Suggestions for site	Off-Topic	905

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Comments

Total number of comments: 78

Title article: Cloud In The Water
Date: 2008-07-05 10:31:50

Brave move on posting this poem, I liked the repetition of the words as it makes the poem very unique but I think you could definitely improve it by having a clear meaning behind it and trying to put the meaning across more clearly to your readers. I do believe that everyone interprets a poem differently though and that's the point of it, so asking for an explanation, I think, is pretty pointless.

Title article: Tsuki To Akai Yukata
Date: 2008-07-05 10:25:38

A brilliant poem. I loved it! Definitely going into my favourites! You created a very believable setting through excellent descriptions and you put across the horror of the situation very well. I liked the layout of the poem as well, with the more important parts highlighted it shows you've put a real effort into making the readers interpret the poem.

Title article: Secret Wars
Date: 2008-07-05 10:21:28

I liked it as it kept me interested all the way through. A very powerful read! I thought the rhyming needed to be looked at and I think it needs to be edited a bit in places but overall I thought it was excellent. Keep 'em coming!

Title article: Tired Avenue Dirkin/Anna Devine
Date: 2008-07-02 02:57:49

I loved it, it was a great read and flowed extremely well. I think the first two stanzas were my favourite although I really liked the very last line 'Passes passion made to last'. I think it was a great idea to have two people create a poem, the two writing styles make it a much more interesting read. Great job!

Title article: Today
Date: 2008-06-26 13:57:00

All new lines need a capital, if i'd put a full stop at the end of the first line it would have meant it was a new sentence. I'm pretty sure that's fine correct me if i'm wrong.

Title article: Today
Date: 2008-06-26 13:46:21

Yeah its so annoying when you find things like that after submitting but thanks for pointing them out.

Title article: Today
Date: 2008-06-26 13:13:10

No I meant its grant as in a wish, thanks for commenting!

Title article: Locked
Date: 2008-06-26 05:43:47

After I read the first line I thought it looked like it was going to be great! But the rest of it just bored me to be honest, I didn't get what you were trying to say in this at all and at times it seemed like you were trying to rhyme just for the sake of it. There were also a couple of grammatical errors

Title article: Help you smile
Date: 2008-06-26 05:36:39

I liked it! Very simple and easy to read. I think the length of it helps symbolize the simplicity of a smile. The bit I liked least was the final line but good job!

Title article: Note to Self
Date: 2008-06-26 05:34:10

Loved it! I really enjoyed reading it because it flows great and you create excellent imagery within all of your poems.