TO WHOM IT MIGHT CONCERN (Gambia Oct '08)

It is not all fun being invisible, not all about...

Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4

After a while, Don finds his composure and says,...
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Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3)
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About Myself: I have 3 things that mean the world to me, my little family, my faith, and my fishing pole. I'm not a great fisherman, but it's good to get out. All other things pretty much confuse me in life. Somethings I just don't get. But by sticking to those 3 things that are simple and wonderful, life is good. I like wholesome writing, however, I do stray from that at times. I guess it's from to much t.v.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 6, 2008Time MachineRomance 512
Apr 13, 2008The CoastAdventure 216
Apr 22, 2008Thump-thumpHorror 494
Apr 2, 2008The ReturnMiscellaneous Stories 179
Apr 2, 2008The Monk, His Apples, a Hound, and The Lost Treasure of John CarterMiscellaneous Stories 222
Apr 16, 2008An Ode To WhiskeyPoetry 193
Apr 12, 2008July 2nd, 1863Poetry 168
Apr 8, 2008The MountPoetry 155

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Total number of comments: 140

Title article: Hiding in the Open
Date: 2008-05-02 17:20:17

Ha, how sick am I, I chuckled at the ending! This was a good story. I kind of keep my personal life to myself at the office, but often wonder what some of these people do once they leave work! This story has me a bit concerned about Monday. Well done!

Title article: never grow old
Date: 2008-05-02 17:12:24

I thought this was great. You can usually predict the outcome of such a short story, but not here. It was quite touching. Very relevant for the new "greatest generation" we're seeing today. Young people laying down their lives on foreign shores, at much to young of an age.

Title article: The Dance of Lovers
Date: 2008-05-02 17:08:18

Pretty steamy...a well written poem!

Title article: My Prayer to GOD (I don't care how these go, these are personal)
Date: 2008-05-01 16:48:43

Hey, I thought this was great. It reminds me of my life and my continual search for Christ. And I now the search will go to the last day.

Title article: Admittedly, I Have Been Busy.
Date: 2008-05-01 06:16:51

What I get from this is that the sun still shines and life goes on regardless of what terrible things may happen in the world, past, present or future. We're all busy with our little corners of the world. I may be way off base here, but this seems like the abstract work you enjoy, as per your critique that I requested. I really like the description of the chair, it was extremely vivid. Abstract isn't really my bag, but this seems to be a good piece of writing here.

Title article: Vera Lane
Date: 2008-04-30 17:26:46

Nice job!

Title article: A Mother's Cry
Date: 2008-04-30 17:24:32

THis was an absolutely terrific message. The first half was heart breaking, and if this is a story of personal experience, which I hope it is not, you are in my prayers. As a short story, it was well written, however it may have been a bit drawn out. Just an abservation though. Life is truly a miracle from the day of conception, I will never understand those who think otherwise.

Title article: The Special Spoon :-P
Date: 2008-04-30 17:11:28

Bratzilla? Good writing, but holy cow! This child is definately not a morning person.

Title article: A Mile Wide
Date: 2008-04-30 17:08:16

This was good. Very relevant. I was just torturing myself today regarding past regrets. The older we get, the wiser we grow, the more stupid we feel.

Title article: Will You Listen?
Date: 2008-04-30 04:13:03

This was good. It was one I think I was able to understand. Too much suffering in the world, with not many of us listening to their pleas.

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Brooke (SageSyren)

 Created On: 04/17/2008 08:11:46
Thanks for signing my guestbook, for reading one of my stories and for asking for a conection. Whew that was a mouth full to type hahaha.
So I thought I'd do the same
See ya around.
Syren
Christian Wright (The 13th)

Wicklow
 Created On: 04/14/2008 12:39:01
Edited By Christian wright (thirteen) On: 04/14/2008 12:39:52
Brought here by the shamrock.Do you have a bit of the irish in you.I was in the neighbourhood and thought i would say hi.I even brought the guiness but no-ones home.More for me so
Enjoyed your stories and Goodluck.

Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)

New Braunfels, TX
 Created On: 04/04/2008 08:40:14
Wouldn't that make 4 things? Or do I not know how to count?
Feedback from Thomas Reynolds (ThomasP3): He, he...you are correct. I must of had mittens on and couldn't see my fingers. By 3 things I meant my family, faith, and fishing pole. Thanks!

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