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i'm a joiner from shropshire and i write for fun

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Total number of comments: 28

Title article: Telephone Meow
Date: 2008-08-14 12:53:20

telephone meow
Hi Josh, nice to hear from you. read your story, put your analyst on danger money baby. some interesting ideas though, try to be a tad more disciplined when it comes to the plot. don't worry too much though after all lewis caroll came up with the mad hatters tea party although that may have been the influence of laudnum. keep up the good if unusual work

Title article: Telephone Meow
Date: 2008-08-14 12:53:14

Title article: Telephone Meow
Date: 2008-08-14 12:53:10

Title article: HANK & BROADS.
Date: 2008-08-09 03:15:19

love thefeel of it, hanks obviously an old hand in the game of love. liked the pace and the way it broke, trying to fathom the last verse, perhaps its open to personal interpretation. whenever i try poetry it ends up as a limerick

Title article: 6 Minutes Until tomorrow
Date: 2008-08-08 08:50:52

this story full of aching loss left me on the verge of sobbing into my tea. i look around at my loved ones and realise once again the fragility of existance

Title article: The Smell of Fear
Date: 2008-08-07 15:06:10

nice one Phill didn't see it coming, i was thinking a bout my childhood and the horrible next door neighbour of my best mate, i had many a beating and what made it worse was that she was a girl although a lot older.i saw her many years later on the cheese counter at somerfield, the strange thing was she was pleased to see me and reminissed about the good old days, i felt like decorating her uniform with the cottage cheese i'd just purchased

Title article: The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-07 14:50:51

very good, nicely descriptive i can almost smell the fear and burned flesh. i seem to remember the survivors of the Indianas sinking were then plagued by sharks, don't imagin i'm a historian or anything, i was just remembering that wonderfull scene in jaws with quin recounting the tale, i think the truly terrifying thing about sharks is their dead eyes. Can't wait to read more, great stuff

Title article: Spider
Date: 2008-08-07 14:36:57

loved it, a very commendable peice of work. I enjoyed the imagery very creepy and as thirteen says you could imagine hopkins reading it. perhaps one day our spider will encounter a wasp and the tables will be turned

Title article: 23rd Century Digital Girl: Chapter 1
Date: 2008-05-16 22:01:06

good story, it realy grabs you, nice one. i read the other two chapters, yuo've realy got something

Title article: Baby Boy
Date: 2008-04-18 13:38:41

very dark

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Xena Elvoniche (Xena)	Created On: 04/24/2008 14:25:21 he he he hoo hoo hoo.. bungle bungle bungle... nice bear costume
Christian Wright (The 13th) Dublin	Created On: 04/06/2008 05:18:21 Edited By Christian wright (thirteen) On: 04/06/2008 05:19:06 Gotta admit I like the photo.