Love Ends

The sun rose serenely over the pond, changing the...

Pain

I cant sleep again. Its like this all the...

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Padmakumar M.J. (Howler)
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About Myself: I'm a filmmaker from Chennai, India. I work as an audio-visual executive for a corporate film company and am a literature bug :)

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Total number of comments: 3

Title article: Screaming Banshees
Date: 2008-03-20 23:02:23

Hi! its a good story with a good buildup. But you could focus a bit on the ending... it does fizz out a wee bit. Dialog's good, very realistic and so's the flow. Just focus a bit on the ending n you'll end up with a kickass story :) On the whole, a very good job :)

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