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DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 3, 2008Girls Just Wanna Have Fun Chapter Deuce 1/2Romance 58
Jul 13, 2008The Lord and The Pink Skunk 3 Chapter Nuevo RevelationsAdventure 293
Jul 4, 2008Girls Just Wanna have funNon-Fiction 200
Jun 25, 2008The exotic tales of a pink skunk and a cucumber, Chapter 76Romance 331
Jun 18, 2008A Pink Skunk and His Lord, Chapter 36Adventure 152
Jun 15, 2008The Moon is My Pet and My LoverMystery 186
Apr 25, 2008Adventures of Undead DaddyAdventure 281
Apr 24, 2008A Brazen ShameMiscellaneous Stories 243
Apr 10, 2008The Birth and Death of a Gang(ster)(s)Romance 430
Apr 7, 2008The Subway AngelScience Fiction 254
Mar 20, 2008Panda Jesus: Or How Jesus Got His Panda BackPoetry 268
Mar 20, 2008Chapter 5 RocksMystery 288

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Title article: Just Wait...
Date: 2008-07-05 23:09:38
this poem
was good. the rythm and song that it had was alright but maybe you can cleaan it up a bit in the middle.. it looks like it just ate a little bit to much.. you know

Title article: To Her Whom Cancer Took
Date: 2008-07-05 19:39:29
not bad
in some places.. a bit choppy in some other ones.. and i couldnt read out what it said to the left... something about miss.. or mizz... i got the right tho.. so.. but the end got a little bit confused me

Title article: The Love "Guru" - Part IV
Date: 2008-07-05 19:35:51
woa
Hey did you know that they made a movie about this? this actually happend to me.. like said something about a ninja panda movie or something.. and then what comes out.. yeap.. you knwo what i think it is?! these motherfucking hollywood assholes are going onto this site and stealing our ideas! and then of course they just fuck em up! damn.. hey lets sue them

Title article: My Fate - Part II
Date: 2008-07-05 19:33:33
pretty good
flowing... flowed ok.. some gram mistakes.. like one guy pushed some people out the bathroom.. and then said everybody leave and pushed everybody out the bathroom.. like you wrote it like he said that..

Title article: words....the organized pattern of sound
Date: 2008-07-05 19:28:37
some
of the things in here were pretty good... i just wasnt feeling the earth as a stone.. well taht was alright.. but i think it was the earth trying to please the thrower.. the throwing of the earth was good.. but not the earth trying to reach the other side... yea

Title article: A Northern Town
Date: 2008-07-05 19:23:54
the beginning
was good... and then i skimmed a bit... but over all you give it a good awry feeling... i liked the countdown thing... but i would of died from the crash... orr did he???

Title article: The Picnic of a Lifetime
Date: 2008-07-05 19:17:57
ohh
not bad guy.. not bad at all... only one death.. true true... but me.. no.. i think id like to be in my sleep.. if at all possible.. and then i dont really give a shit what they will do with me then.. ill tell them.. please dont burry me.. you dont even have to cremate me.. nothing fancy.. dont waste yoru money.. you know.. im dead.. what the fuck will i care.. right? foresnt thing sounds cool tho

Title article: The Path That Time Forgot
Date: 2008-07-05 19:10:24
could of
been alot better... and way too short... zonk out of ideas did you? put em on another planet... im serious... that would work... have them stumble into a time portal or something.. really.. think about it

Title article: The Love That Was Never To Have Been
Date: 2008-07-05 19:07:40
Razzle
razzle and Geffron... Razzle... I like the names... but everything else appears to be the same... (you like that?) so like there is some planet out there whith a whacky name.. adn all the people have wacky names... but everything else is the exact same.. like boats and gardens and... and.. kings.. youd think they would have other crazy names for things...(im not even trying.. seriously) but you know ranjeiek... but anyway.. i think youve stumbled onto something here.. taking old classics.. and then putting them on another planets and.. stuff... not a bad start

Title article: Evanescent Truths
Date: 2008-07-05 19:01:20
huh
evenasence is a band...

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Christian Wright (The 13th)

hell
 Created On: 07/09/2008 05:02:59
Edited By Christian Wright (The 13th) On: 07/30/2008 12:52:48
I'm in a better mood now.

Roby Thomas (Roby)

St. Clair Shores, MI
 Created On: 07/08/2008 05:47:02
I don't mind the bad review, it's just stepping stones to making a better story. However, sounds like you know from experience about pills.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

I DONT KNOW!!!
 Created On: 07/04/2008 01:08:06
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 07/04/2008 01:09:25
at least your head doesnt hurt...


Your stories are truely inspiring and deserve every reward possible.
Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire
 Created On: 07/04/2008 00:37:48
I'll be a liitle more polite.

Good morning......

Phil
Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

 Created On: 06/29/2008 18:15:22
AY! Did YOU know that you're a fucking moron????
Christian Wright (The 13th)

in the dark
 Created On: 04/11/2008 06:04:55
oceans 13 is the best film ever!!!

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hill country, texas
 Created On: 03/20/2008 13:21:12
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