TO WHOM IT MIGHT CONCERN (Gambia Oct '08)

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But Did He?

He said that he wanted her But did he?...
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DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 3, 2008Girls Just Wanna Have Fun Chapter Deuce 1/2Romance 219
Jun 25, 2008The exotic tales of a pink skunk and a cucumber, Chapter 76Romance 352
Apr 10, 2008The Birth and Death of a Gang(ster)(s)Romance 465
Jul 13, 2008The Lord and The Pink Skunk 3 Chapter Nuevo RevelationsAdventure 328
Jun 18, 2008A Pink Skunk and His Lord, Chapter 36Adventure 175
Apr 25, 2008Adventures of Undead DaddyAdventure 305
Jun 15, 2008The Moon is My Pet and My LoverMystery 206
Sep 26, 2008The Cosmonaut AvengerMiscellaneous Stories 137
Jul 4, 2008Girls Just Wanna have funNon-Fiction 225

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Total number of comments: 285

Title article: Clock Makers Doll
Date: 2008-10-02 23:25:08
hoogidy moogidy
i think its a good tale and all some good stuff but its like hidden beneath a bunch of other stuff that clouds that stuff... the good stuff you know what i mean? like too much just droning on it got me antsy in my pansties you know what i mean... trim the fat!

Title article: The Cosmonaut Avenger
Date: 2008-10-01 01:14:22
furbies
glad yall got the concept

Title article: Acorns Don't Fall Far
Date: 2008-09-26 17:16:26
i read
read the story, i meani didnt read the story, i just read the title, and i just wanted to point out that acorns do fall, otherwise how would they get on the ground!

Title article: TO INNOCENCE
Date: 2008-09-26 17:12:58
ehhha
though o bringest me my bread tho i may tastiest thee great o one of you... thats how i htought it was gonna go but it actually didnt, so i have to say kudos to you and your poem for misleading me in my prejudgements

Title article: Fifty-One
Date: 2008-09-22 21:43:00
im gonna lie
and say i read it all.... but as i read i couldnt help feeling like i was reading a list.. you know what i mean, all the short sentences just made it choppy and kind of, list like, you know what i mean? or is that just me...

Title article: You Want What?
Date: 2008-09-22 21:38:18
ay
not everyone uses the phone.... even people who arnent living in an african tribe... infact last time i checked... there were more people who havent used it then did... yea im right... cute story.. cept that guys an ediot

Title article: Light from the tree of Life
Date: 2008-09-14 21:02:59
zimmenay
good but too long... and too much stuff goin on... you like that? or how about... the life from the tree of light.. ay... and the last line is a little confusing, to me atleast.. in return.. in return for what? anyway good concept

Title article: Snow Day
Date: 2008-09-14 20:52:19
huh?
a bit confusing at parts... but... wehre was the homosexuality? im pretty sure it said it was a guy and girl doing the kissing and fondling and such... unless the girl was a guy in drag and i missed it... but, i doubt that... so where is it?! i demand more explicit homosexuality!

Title article: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun Chapter Deuce 1/2
Date: 2008-09-04 22:17:34
well
thanks doc i dont really know how i would do that so im just gonna say that he is a spy from heaven and then later when he is in trouble he will be saved by xena, who kills herself to go down and help.

Title article: Walpurgis Night
Date: 2008-08-23 01:13:59
ps
and that intro is also misleading! it describes this mysterious witch gathering from germanic viking tribes.. and hey what do you mean by traditions. its a tradition held by geranic countries, where once a year witches meet? what does that mean? you mean like a holiday tradition, like eating turkey on thanksgiving? so wouldnt these be the witches tradition? so like once a year witches hold a tradition known has walrus night where they all meet in germanic countries and horrid things? cause what you said didnt make sense.. unless the germanic people r witches, and they meet? so then what do the germanic vikings do on this tradition? oh and its terrifying? ohh whats gonna happen?! i cant wait!... witches flying theyre so scary, and people get frightened... tell me thats not what happend! and then to add a unreliable narrator and unreliable characters,, you say theyre real, you say the ongoers see them and cry, yet they say later that it was suprstition! whats going on heya....

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Christian Wright (The 13th)

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