If The Sun Didn't Rise

IF THE SUN DIDN'T RISE BY JON STALK...

The Peacock Case

When the train doors opened, a blast of sticky air...
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Total number of comments: 17

Title article: Betrayed by a friend
Date: 2008-07-22 15:17:33
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i dont really get whats going on here. i get that the friendship is over, but i think i got that because of the title. the poem is to vague. i like the idea you were going for. try adding to it. giving it more depth.

Title article: Mistaken
Date: 2008-07-22 15:13:24
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! dude! that guy has had a tuff week. i thought it was a good poem. you think one thing is happening and then BLAM! something else! it was sad, but cool.

Title article: Flowers on the Wall
Date: 2008-07-22 15:02:42
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OH, DEAR GOD!!! SATANIC FLOWERS!!! 
what will lucifur come up with next?!?!  
over all i REALLY liked this poem. i like the creepiness at the beginning and the strength at the end. although, ill probably be burning alot of flowers now. YOUVE MADE ME PARANOID!! i swear that plant is looking at me!!

Title article: All Liquid Diet
Date: 2008-07-22 14:51:11
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awwww!!! jeez! i had to re-read that ending about three times. thats sad cause it is sooooo true. i know to many people who look amazeing but never feel like they do. self esteem has really gotten low. i wish people could see that every one is different. NO ONE LOOKS LIKE A MODEL! even models dont look like models! their pictures are AIRBRUSHED! LADIES! YOU ARE BEAUTIFULL THE WAY YOU ARE!!

Title article: I Remember
Date: 2008-07-22 14:40:38
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Amazing story. i really love the style of your writing. it flows so well. the character developement was nice and i loved how she remembered it but the descriptions were different. and just like everyone else said. it made me a little sad.

Title article: Cigarettes and Cluster Bombs
Date: 2008-07-22 14:32:09
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i would also liked to have bitten into a more hardy middle, but i really enjoyed this story.  
 
nicely done. 
 
i felt bad for the man, though. as time passes, he'll be remembered as the cigarrete guy, and nothing more.

Title article: just a letter
Date: 2008-04-04 14:03:04

my happy day just went out the window....

Title article: Psychedelic Relic
Date: 2008-04-02 14:12:38

i wrote wooooaaahh and it said that im r.e.potter...........far out

Title article: Psychedelic Relic
Date: 2008-04-02 14:10:01

im not r.e.potter

Title article: girl
Date: 2008-03-19 13:31:26

^^ i like to think she was a ghost to.

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