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So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

When the train doors opened, a blast of sticky air...

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Member Since	03/19/2008
Last Online	08/02/2008
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Date	Title	Category	Hits
Mar 19, 2008	girl	Miscellaneous Stories	244
May 2, 2008	never grow old	Miscellaneous Stories	157
Apr 4, 2008	never	Miscellaneous Stories	149
Jul 22, 2008	lost boys of the sudan	Miscellaneous Stories	125

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Total number of comments: 17

Title article: Betrayed by a friend
Date: 2008-07-22 15:17:33

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i dont really get whats going on here. i get that the friendship is over, but i think i got that because of the title. the poem is to vague. i like the idea you were going for. try adding to it. giving it more depth.

Title article: Mistaken
Date: 2008-07-22 15:13:24

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! dude! that guy has had a tuff week. i thought it was a good poem. you think one thing is happening and then BLAM! something else! it was sad, but cool.

Title article: Flowers on the Wall
Date: 2008-07-22 15:02:42

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OH, DEAR GOD!!! SATANIC FLOWERS!!!
what will lucifur come up with next?!?!
over all i REALLY liked this poem. i like the creepiness at the beginning and the strength at the end. although, ill probably be burning alot of flowers now. YOUVE MADE ME PARANOID!! i swear that plant is looking at me!!

Title article: All Liquid Diet
Date: 2008-07-22 14:51:11

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awwww!!! jeez! i had to re-read that ending about three times. thats sad cause it is sooooo true. i know to many people who look amazeing but never feel like they do. self esteem has really gotten low. i wish people could see that every one is different. NO ONE LOOKS LIKE A MODEL! even models dont look like models! their pictures are AIRBRUSHED! LADIES! YOU ARE BEAUTIFULL THE WAY YOU ARE!!

Title article: I Remember
Date: 2008-07-22 14:40:38

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Amazing story. i really love the style of your writing. it flows so well. the character developement was nice and i loved how she remembered it but the descriptions were different. and just like everyone else said. it made me a little sad.

Title article: Cigarettes and Cluster Bombs
Date: 2008-07-22 14:32:09

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i would also liked to have bitten into a more hardy middle, but i really enjoyed this story.

nicely done.

i felt bad for the man, though. as time passes, he'll be remembered as the cigarrete guy, and nothing more.

Title article: just a letter
Date: 2008-04-04 14:03:04

my happy day just went out the window....

Title article: Psychedelic Relic
Date: 2008-04-02 14:12:38

i wrote wooooaaahh and it said that im r.e.potter...........far out

Title article: Psychedelic Relic
Date: 2008-04-02 14:10:01

im not r.e.potter

Title article: girl
Date: 2008-03-19 13:31:26

^^ i like to think she was a ghost to.

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