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THE RED HAT ( Dedicated to W.J.Martin)...

Another one from the archive to keep me relevent(lol...

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About Myself:

someday I hope to have the courage to follow my heart.

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Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Mar 20, 2008	Street Value	Miscellaneous Stories	228
Mar 19, 2008	Japanese Restaurant	Miscellaneous Stories	437
Mar 17, 2008	The Dealership	Miscellaneous Stories	337

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Title article: Choices
Date: 2008-03-19 11:06:12

The story is really good but the grammar and spelling need serious help.

I especially liked the ending.

Title article: Day of Terror
Date: 2008-03-19 10:53:29

That was good, though I agree with R.E. Potter in that the ending seems incomplete.

the part where the one bomber gets caught adds realism, no plan ever works flawlessly in real life.

Title article: I'm Cold
Date: 2008-03-17 21:17:34

This is depressing. I often feel I am in a cold and lonely place due to the choices I have made.

Title article: The Good Morning
Date: 2008-03-17 21:07:47

Do the tree's outside symbolize an erection?

Do dreams of his unknown mother make him horny because she is the most important and yet totally unattainable female in his life?

Title article: Light Bringer
Date: 2008-03-17 20:50:46

This story is great. It's like reading part of a well written fantasy novel but with the whole God/Satan thing mixed in. I really enjoyed it.

Title article: The Dealership
Date: 2008-03-17 20:31:21

Dirkin, most religions, especially christianity, require an incredible amount of "blind faith." you have to beleive fully in something you have and will never have any physical evidence of. it was created during a time when people needed such things to beleive in. when everything was a mystery to be feared. in todays age it is almost ludicrous to actually think there is a "heaven and hell"

Title article: The Dealership
Date: 2008-03-17 11:58:59

You nailed it deadon. it's an attack on christianity.

the first insurance plan is supposed tp represent basic protestantism, the second is catholicism.

and of course if neither of those work for you there are countless more to choose from...

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