The Beast and the Wicked Witch

tale as old as time true as it can be She turn...

gone was the girl

gone was the girl once innocent of love, heartaches...
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Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp)
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About Myself: I'm a 22 year old guy from Montreal, Quebec. Just love reading and writing. :)
I'm currently studying languages (Spanish and German) but I've just been accepted in Litterature at the UQAM here in Montreal. Plan on working in the book industry.

Feel free to comment, good or bad I don't mind (one needs to be open to critique) and thank you for reading what I enjoyed writing!

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04/14/2008 21:07:59For those about to be Gimped!Off-Topic617
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03/18/2008 19:07:44Re:Favorite AuthorOff-Topic2814
04/16/2008 05:29:44Re:For those about to be Gimped!Off-Topic617
04/15/2008 16:59:23Re:For those about to be Gimped!Off-Topic617
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03/27/2008 08:48:04Re:Going to Disney WorldOff-Topic170
04/04/2008 21:12:56Re:I'm A Stranger Here MyselfOff-Topic1133

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Total number of comments: 64

Title article: Here and Back Again
Date: 2008-05-05 14:55:08
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Interesting poem my friend, the rhymes aren't "quite" right since "asked" and "mask" just sounds alike hehe! ;) And it's tortured not torchured. 
 
Anyway you had a good idea there and that's what really matters, it was nicely done! Keep it up buddy!

Title article: Corruption
Date: 2008-05-03 09:13:30
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Yeah I feel the same, at first there was simply too much description for catching the interest of someone just browsing. But the rest was cool once the Dictator came in. I would suggest expanding the story and the action a little more and cutting some useless descriptions at the beginning. Then it would be perfect for a short story, if not, expand it and make it a few pagers, wrap it up in christmas gift paper and ring me back, I want to read that! ;) 
 
Very nice setting, feel and idea. Cheers mate!

Title article: Smoke, Steel, and Innuendo
Date: 2008-05-03 08:56:54
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Hmmm I describe coffee as a woman and you as a gun... Violent man you are 1800! :p

Title article: Nature Through a Human Heart
Date: 2008-04-28 16:36:32
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Awesome poem, I really really love the pace of it and how you cut the syllables up. Keep it up, great job!

Title article: Perfection
Date: 2008-04-28 16:12:50
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Not bad but after the intro I was expecting something more towards the end. It left me hungry for more. Cool idea though, you should expand it some more!

Title article: Just Like Her
Date: 2008-04-28 10:15:16
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Yep... Just smile and nod... Good work man, loved it!

Title article: LOVE
Date: 2008-04-24 18:17:34
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Not bad, not my kind of poetry since I think that french is more proper and beautiful to hear than english but overall you did a great job :) Keep it up! 
 
PS: CAPS ARE FOR SHOUTING ON THE INTERNET, Cheers! ;)

Title article: What Is It?
Date: 2008-04-20 09:25:21
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Liked the general idea, but I'm not completely sure I got it all... Is Fasher the one that sent the 57 000$ worth item? Why? And yeah... I'm a bit confused... 0_o

Title article: Alien Presentation
Date: 2008-04-20 07:52:26
Amazing
A slap in the face of humanity. Great story!

Title article: Letting Us Die
Date: 2008-04-20 07:48:14
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Wow buddy, that's one of the best poem I've read in a long long time. Interesting subject, gripping style, imagery is crystal clear, it makes you think and judge your values... Yep, truly loved it!

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