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Alamo St-Jean (The_Gimp) Profile Page

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Member Since	03/16/2008 12:24:57
Last Online	05/14/2008 13:19:28
Last Updated	04/20/2008 06:40:29
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Total Posts	76
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About Myself:

I'm a 22 year old guy from Montreal, Quebec. Just love reading and writing. :)
I'm currently studying languages (Spanish and German) but I've just been accepted in Litterature at the UQAM here in Montreal. Plan on working in the book industry.

Feel free to comment, good or bad I don't mind (one needs to be open to critique) and thank you for reading what I enjoyed writing!

Date	Title	Hits	Rating
Monday, 28 April 2008	Vagabonde (Homeless)	70	/ 2
Monday, 28 April 2008	Untitled	75	/ 2
Monday, 28 April 2008	Apocalypse's In Motion	64	/ 3
Monday, 28 April 2008	Lost	72	/ 1
Monday, 21 April 2008	Choices	110	/ 4
Wednesday, 16 April 2008	SDRAWKCAB	95	/ 2
Tuesday, 15 April 2008	Coherent Offers For Freedom Efficiency	117	/ 6
Wednesday, 09 April 2008	The Wanderer	122	/ 1
Friday, 04 April 2008	Refusal Of Losing At The Game Of Life	82	/ 2
Friday, 04 April 2008	Bob Barker's A F*cking Robot	85	/ 0
Sunday, 30 March 2008	Always And Never	426	/ 2
Friday, 28 March 2008	A Heist For Pandora	87	/ 1
Wednesday, 26 March 2008	Creatures	166	/ 4
Tuesday, 25 March 2008	Her Green Eyes Past Midnight	294	/ 8
Saturday, 22 March 2008	The Appointment	195	/ 4
Tuesday, 18 March 2008	The Last Man Standing	269	/ 5

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Comments

Total number of comments: 64

Title article: The Last Battle
Date: 2008-05-07 14:00:03

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Hmmm not sure I get this one... Is this part of another, longer story? Or that is it and... Its just a fight?

Title article: Vagabonde (Homeless)
Date: 2008-05-05 18:56:25

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I don't mind, as long as you don't sell it or make profit out of it other than getting laid... :P I got no objections Potter! ;)

Title article: Apocalypse's In Motion
Date: 2008-05-05 18:55:24

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Well you're actually really close to what I was thinking about back then. Eyes of glass are cameras though, or TV... ;) Great minds thinks alike!

Title article: Here and Back Again
Date: 2008-05-05 14:55:08

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Interesting poem my friend, the rhymes aren't "quite" right since "asked" and "mask" just sounds alike hehe! ;) And it's tortured not torchured.

Anyway you had a good idea there and that's what really matters, it was nicely done! Keep it up buddy!

Title article: Untitled
Date: 2008-05-03 17:06:55

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It's about war and the human race and my fear of it.

And yes, Egoist you got the reference right.

Title article: Corruption
Date: 2008-05-03 09:13:30

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Yeah I feel the same, at first there was simply too much description for catching the interest of someone just browsing. But the rest was cool once the Dictator came in. I would suggest expanding the story and the action a little more and cutting some useless descriptions at the beginning. Then it would be perfect for a short story, if not, expand it and make it a few pagers, wrap it up in christmas gift paper and ring me back, I want to read that! ;)

Very nice setting, feel and idea. Cheers mate!

Title article: Smoke, Steel, and Innuendo
Date: 2008-05-03 08:56:54

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Hmmm I describe coffee as a woman and you as a gun... Violent man you are 1800! :p

Title article: Bob Barker's A F*cking Robot
Date: 2008-05-02 07:59:59

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So art should be censored? Sorry if you were offended, I at least had the decency of putting an asterisk...

Title article: Her Green Eyes Past Midnight
Date: 2008-04-28 18:41:08

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Thanks for the kind words man. It means a lot! But yeah, 32 minues 15= 17 minutes, not 32 hehe! ;)

I might consider and write a prequel to this, since this is the final showdown at the Mancini's Mansion but right there at the beginning the man is limping from a wound inflicted by Jimmy Mancini (one of the Mafioso's son). The man confronted another lot of goons before reaching revenge.

Anyways, feel good to get comments, me want more! :p

Title article: Apocalypse's In Motion
Date: 2008-04-28 18:36:46

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Yeah you pretty much got it, not quite the Ipod generation, but society as it stands today.

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