Shattered Window

The image of the shattered stained glass is still...

STORIES FROM CAMP 6, Chapter 1

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Last Online 08/29/2008
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Title article: The Long Walk
Date: 2008-06-28 14:06:06

Holy moly Amie.and you say I'm scary.Been plodding through a few of your stories.You actually remind me of Potter.His writing is very diverse too.Enjoyed this, good story.Could have been longer and you could of explained more about their relationship but that may have ruined the man's surprising reaction.Now I'm off to read something fluffy and nice.

Title article: She
Date: 2008-06-28 13:59:30

Reminds me of allmine stuff.I know it's the wrong word to use but I enjoyed this.I think I need a hug.Anybody...please...

Title article: Test + Torture = Testure
Date: 2008-06-28 13:46:28

I thought it was nicely written.Did'nt see anything wrong with it.You'd have to be picky to pick faults with your style.But the story was a let down.You spent most of the story gettin into the techy issues trying to hide the fact that they are rats.A bit silly really.Very simular to planet of the apes.Maybe I missed this bit.The human had his eye wrenched out.Why did'nt he shout "bloody hell" or something.

Title article: Thirteen Years Of Gray, Chapter 6
Date: 2008-06-28 10:30:59

I actually felt as if I was having a baby.Too painful but ure words were pretty.But thats about it.

Title article: no title
Date: 2008-06-28 00:57:09

Do you want comments...I take it you do.Well it's simple.Comment on others and maybe they will do you a favour.1 comment, that's not good. 
Story has got potential .

Title article: One for the Road
Date: 2008-06-28 00:24:47
Take this one off the road.
Gotta agree with the ZP.This story has nothing new.Guy dies, he misses everyone and he is so angry then he gives us one last bit of advice.I just wrote your story in 19 words.You have an idea that could be worked and it was wrote pretty well.Did'nt see any grammar issues or spelling.Just promise me one thing don't turn this into aseries.But if you dont agree , dont pm just do what most so-called author's do.Delete my comment.

Title article: The End
Date: 2008-06-28 00:14:47

Amusing ditty.Should make this longer.Thought there was a few amusing lines there but nothing ground breaking.But the others are wrong.This should'nt be in humour.Well done though

Title article: Dual Personality
Date: 2008-06-27 11:15:17

I will give 5 for the comments.Shagging funny.

Title article: Keeping it Untied
Date: 2008-06-27 00:07:55

gotta agree with the resistance.Just did'nt get this.A naked girl, do you mean woman.Maybe change the story a tad.Make it a bit more appealing.Your grammar seemed fine and the descriptions are not too bad.

Title article: Wolf, bat, and demon, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-27 00:00:54

Maybe you read the above comments and fix your errors.Off to part2

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Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 07/12/2008 14:47:19
so Flossy...if that's even your real name . Its just me the stalker coming to stalk you some more.. I realize I've fallen behind on my stalking lately..hmm I wonder how many more times I can say stalker in this post? God I'm bored

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Amie Kerlin (lemon)

inside your head
 Created On: 06/30/2008 17:23:17
you mean you've never been stalked before? I find that hard to believe
Feedback from Jamie Steatham (Lord Pinkington): Normally I'm the stalker.But I cant talk about that.It's still with the courts to decide.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

under the mud and mire, trying to claw my way out.
 Created On: 06/28/2008 14:35:29
now I'm invading your guestbook. mwahaha! where are your stories? Thanks for the comments you left on my stories
Feedback from Jamie Steatham (Lord Pinkington): I have my own stalker.Cool!!

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