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Jamie Steatham (Lord Pinkington)
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Member Since 03/15/2008
Last Online 08/29/2008
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Title article: To Her Whom Cancer Took
Date: 2008-07-01 00:36:07

Did enjoy this.Very neatly written.

Title article: THE SECRET WIND, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-30 15:35:15

Oka, it was'nt great but it was'nt that bad.Just stop with the caps.Its silly.Put it in paragraphs.How long did this take for you do to.If it took a few hours then there is youre problem.Write it , leave it a day then see what you can do.If you have a friend or a teacher then ask to see what they think.There is plenty of writers on here that are pretty good .Look at their wook.See what they do.I think I'm right, your only 14.So I dont want to put you down too much.Keep at it.Just note the comments and change.goodluck.

Title article: Coles to Newcastle
Date: 2008-06-30 07:11:33

This was just a simple sweet story but you wrote it with such elegance.I loved this piece. 
time had seemed to increase its relentless march with an ever quickening pace. 
This is why this site is so good, because of writers like yourself.We can learn so much. 
Good description, good story and Harold, is a great character.I really felt for him.Well done on a great job.

Title article: Dream #1
Date: 2008-06-30 07:01:43

Did'nt really like it.I thought great descriptions and the characters were pretty good.Just the story lost me but no big deal.goodluck.

Title article: Feeling nostalgic for when tomorrow was your future?
Date: 2008-06-30 06:52:15

Really loved this.Great descriptions.I have read your poetry and I wanted to read a story by you.You need no advice from a weak mortal like myself.Game on brother.Well done.

Title article: Appealing Story
Date: 2008-06-30 06:47:30

I dont think you know many women Heel.(maybe you are a woman, i dunno)Women dont just brush off you then they want a quick shag.Some do but they would want to be paid.This is was just excuse to write porn.Is that why you called it"appealing story" 
Oka agree with Phil about the start.It had something but the end sank quicker than the titanic.Maybe I'm a prude but if I want to read about shagging I will read my fiance diary.

Title article: I'm Gonna Miss You
Date: 2008-06-30 02:12:12

Evanescence dont sing this kind of music.Maybe youre thinking of The bee gees.

Title article: THE FALL OF ABRIA, Chapter 7
Date: 2008-06-30 01:02:15

I see on your profile our only 14.Well done, you have a great imagination.If you enjoy writing.Think about doing a writing class.Firstly the capital letters were doin my head in.Secodly keep an eye on your spelling.Dont give in and goodluck.

Title article: Fat Phobia
Date: 2008-06-30 00:51:06

Just did'nt get it.Agree woth lemon.You could make it longer.But as it is it has'nt got anything appealing.

Title article: I'm Gonna Miss You
Date: 2008-06-29 15:24:29

There is actually a site where you can record your music and it stores it for you.Then others can play it.Tarhead does it.Pm him. 
Gotta agree with the pilgrim I would have to hear it.But reading the words does nothing for me and I am a romantic.(not)

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Amie Kerlin (lemon)

 Created On: 07/12/2008 14:47:19
so Flossy...if that's even your real name . Its just me the stalker coming to stalk you some more.. I realize I've fallen behind on my stalking lately..hmm I wonder how many more times I can say stalker in this post? God I'm bored

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Amie Kerlin (lemon)

inside your head
 Created On: 06/30/2008 17:23:17
you mean you've never been stalked before? I find that hard to believe
Feedback from Jamie Steatham (Lord Pinkington): Normally I'm the stalker.But I cant talk about that.It's still with the courts to decide.
Amie Kerlin (lemon)

under the mud and mire, trying to claw my way out.
 Created On: 06/28/2008 14:35:29
now I'm invading your guestbook. mwahaha! where are your stories? Thanks for the comments you left on my stories
Feedback from Jamie Steatham (Lord Pinkington): I have my own stalker.Cool!!

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