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Her car, out of gas once again; slides to a stop in...

I can't believe she broke up with me! After five years...

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Member Since	03/12/2008
Last Online	10/06/2008
Connections	14
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Website/Blog:	myspace.com/wichita_witch_doctor
About Myself:	hello. my name is nick, but my pen name is Nate Stanford. so you can call me that. goodnight.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Oct 2, 2008	Eyes Open	Poetry	65
Oct 1, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 6	Miscellaneous Stories	26
Sep 23, 2008	The Undertakers- Part 2- Funerals	Horror	51
Sep 18, 2008	And Here I Am	Poetry	56
Aug 25, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 5	Miscellaneous Stories	49
Aug 23, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 4	Miscellaneous Stories	78
Aug 21, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 3	Miscellaneous Stories	73
Aug 20, 2008	The Ungrateful Waves	Poetry	111
Jul 14, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 2	Miscellaneous Stories	88
Jul 11, 2008	The Day We Became Men, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	116
Jun 14, 2008	The Seen and the Unseen	Horror	119
Jun 5, 2008	Snowman	Poetry	132
Jun 2, 2008	Grey Tidings, Chapter 1	Horror	99
May 19, 2008	Help You Sleep at Night	Poetry	138
May 18, 2008	The New Jordans	Humor	254
May 16, 2008	The Undertakers- Part 1- Murderers	Horror	144
May 14, 2008	Civil War	Miscellaneous Stories	172
May 12, 2008	I am my Crucifix	Poetry	147
May 12, 2008	Bleeding Out the Past	Poetry	177
May 11, 2008	Unrequited	Poetry	139

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Comments

Title article: I'm Losing my Mind
Date: 2008-07-15 15:02:36

I thought it was pretty good. It seemed at parts you were trying too hard to make the words rhyme and it sounded almost staccato.

Title article: Wiggedy Wack
Date: 2008-07-14 14:43:01

I thought it was terrific.

Title article: Building Steam with a Grain of God
Date: 2008-07-11 23:37:34

It was pretty difficult to keep up with, but that can be a good thing. Its late, I'll probably read it again in the morning and comprehend it a little better. Anyways, good poem, I liked the way everything flowed.

Title article: His Favorite Chords.
Date: 2008-06-20 10:21:50

Wow.
I assume you are already very happy with all the intelligent reviews before mine but I want to let you know that I really enjoyed this, it painted a picture of that landscape and this story really put me to peace. Very relaxing, very gentle, not egotistic at all. I look forward to reading more of your works. Keep it up!

Title article: Neverlife
Date: 2008-06-20 09:21:22

This was a pretty confusing tale. But I have to ask how Chad went down so quickly? He was 50,000 times stronger than Matt and they killed him so easily. I would have liked a little bit more backstory to further develop the characters, so this could have been done in parts, but I enjoyed reading it. One more thing, in the beginning, they were looking through weapons to take and fight Chad the first time and then they just take him on man-to-man? Ah well, it was good. Very imaginative.

Title article: True Love
Date: 2008-06-20 09:13:06

Just ignore bamjedi. After reading his own work I can hardly take him seriously. I really liked this poem, it was beautiful and it reflects a talented poet. Keep it up! :D

Title article: TRUE LOVE IS??
Date: 2008-06-20 09:10:33

Wow. I'm starting to think there is little hope in the poetry world for Brent. But, as you seem to be doing, keep trying with different things, but next time put a little more effort into the way it flows, and the rhyme scheme. Generally most of my own poems do not have a set rhyme scheme but it can help the flow alot. Don't let all these comments get to you, everybody has potential to be a great poet.

Title article: Risk for Love, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-20 09:07:03

This isn't a good poem. It makes me wonder why these ones become so popular, and there are probably atleast decent poems we've all passed over to rip you up for this one.

Title article: Parapraxis
Date: 2008-06-14 11:34:49

Rob forgot to tell Lilly about his theory of Karma. :]

Great story, I really loved it.

Title article: Run
Date: 2008-06-02 17:12:50

oooh. creepy.

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

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05/22/2008 20:33:52	Re:For all you horror movie fans out there...	Off-Topic	1438
03/25/2008 14:58:23	Re:real name	Off-Topic	695
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Connection

Nate Stanford (nick711)'s connections

Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)

Paula (hey_hey_paula)

Matt (midnighthowl15)

Gwyn (Darkness.of.Mystery)

Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)

retrocious.[/sneh] (hxc inc.)

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Lori Branson (lorislittlesecret)

Nichelle (stripes_paper.cut)

Billy (Vango)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)	Created On: 05/11/2008 19:37:38 It is good that you comment people frequently. There should be more of that. I have tried to find your stories, and I found one and read/feedbacked it. If you could give me a list of which are stories, that would be awesome. I liked the tone. Hope you keep commenting others and helping them out, it's a good thing.
Hanna McCormack (extinct kiddo) Chi-Townn	Created On: 03/13/2008 19:07:43 hey thurr, your stories and poems are great. keep writing!
Jutta Motrin (Juttabell^^)	Created On: 03/12/2008 14:17:22 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 05/21/2008 11:16:27 [Notice: Last Edit by Site Moderator]