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Member Since	03/12/2008
Last Online	10/14/2008
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Website/Blog:	myspace.com/wichita_witch_doctor
About Myself:	hello. my name is nick, but my pen name is Nate Stanford. so you can call me that. goodnight.

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Mar 18, 2008	The Politician	Poetry	192
Mar 18, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 5- The Train	Adventure	209
Mar 17, 2008	The Fool	Poetry	168
Mar 17, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 4- The Temptress	Adventure	171
Mar 16, 2008	The Criminal	Poetry	189
Mar 16, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 3- The Coffee Shop	Adventure	164
Mar 15, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 2: The Message	Adventure	165
Mar 15, 2008	Avery McCoy- Chapter 1: The Hunt	Adventure	213
Mar 13, 2008	Apology	Poetry	301
Mar 12, 2008	Heroes	Poetry	247
Mar 12, 2008	Only Human	Poetry	435

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Comments

Total number of comments: 193

Title article: Eyes Open
Date: 2008-10-04 18:02:12

The last line used to be "sense becomes acute"

but for some reason i thought it was six so i changed acute to keen.

yes, it is a haiku.

Title article: A Killer in the House
Date: 2008-10-02 21:32:16

Haha I loved the ending.

It came upon quickly at the beginning and I was thinking about stopping because it seemed like an all-over-the-place story.

But it wrapped up nicely.

Nice job.

Title article: To all the Young Lovers
Date: 2008-10-02 17:14:18

I absolutely loved this. It was just so beautiful, you put alot of emotion into it, mixed with maybe an experience or two of your own.

You should definitely publish more work, it was excellent. I look forward to reading more.

Regards,

Nick

Title article: I Will Lay In Vain
Date: 2008-10-02 17:02:32

Writing is a great way to relay emotions and you did so very well.

Title article: Tell Me That You Love Me
Date: 2008-09-23 18:23:11

this was INCREDIBLE!

i loved the blend with the old English it was fantastic.

Title article: The Predator 2 -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-09-23 17:27:12

this one sounds more straightforward but to me it seems very rigid.

the first one flowed much better but i guess there were some errors that needed to be remedied.

-best regards,
nick

Title article: The Predator 1 -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-09-23 17:23:43

ah i just love these haikus.

i should give it a shot.

Title article: Her Face -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-08-28 07:52:51

When I saw this on you're list of stories, I thought: A Haiku? Should be easy enough.

But with ease and only a few words you achieved the power of an epic.

I have no idea what a filigree is. Oh, here it is.

noun- delicate and intricate ornamentation

That makes sense. I should add this to my vocabulary.

Great haiku.
Best of luck.

Title article: When No One Else Is Near
Date: 2008-08-28 07:45:48

Very nice poem.

I'm not very religious, but I was at a point to be able to tell that this reflected alot of spiritual insight.

Nice work.

Title article: Ode to Chaabuk
Date: 2008-08-28 07:28:17

Nice try, but it didn't do much for me.

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)	Created On: 05/11/2008 19:37:38 It is good that you comment people frequently. There should be more of that. I have tried to find your stories, and I found one and read/feedbacked it. If you could give me a list of which are stories, that would be awesome. I liked the tone. Hope you keep commenting others and helping them out, it's a good thing.
Hanna McCormack (extinct kiddo) Chi-Townn	Created On: 03/13/2008 19:07:43 hey thurr, your stories and poems are great. keep writing!
BGM (BGM)	Created On: 03/12/2008 14:17:22 Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 05/21/2008 11:16:27 [Notice: Last Edit by Site Moderator]