Her Magic Touch, Chapter 4

After a while, Don finds his composure and says,...

When I Think of You

The rain cascades down Soaking my hair and...
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Website/Blog: myspace.com/wichita_witch_doctor
About Myself: hello.

my name is nick,

but my pen name is Nate Stanford.

so you can call me that.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 2, 2008Eyes OpenPoetry 70
Oct 1, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 6Miscellaneous Stories 35
Sep 23, 2008The Undertakers- Part 2- FuneralsHorror 73
Sep 18, 2008And Here I AmPoetry 67
Aug 25, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 5Miscellaneous Stories 56
Aug 23, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 4Miscellaneous Stories 91
Aug 21, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 79
Aug 20, 2008The Ungrateful WavesPoetry 121
Jul 14, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 92
Jul 11, 2008The Day We Became Men, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 123
Jun 14, 2008The Seen and the UnseenHorror 123
Jun 5, 2008SnowmanPoetry 136
Jun 2, 2008Grey Tidings, Chapter 1Horror 108
May 19, 2008Help You Sleep at NightPoetry 141
May 18, 2008The New JordansHumor 261
May 16, 2008The Undertakers- Part 1- MurderersHorror 152
May 14, 2008Civil WarMiscellaneous Stories 178
May 12, 2008I am my CrucifixPoetry 152
May 12, 2008Bleeding Out the PastPoetry 181
May 11, 2008UnrequitedPoetry 143
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Title article: Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise
Date: 2008-08-23 14:59:51

Flawless poem. I noticed the change of content with your writing in this one but only made it more powerful. 
 
Keep it up.

Title article: Cleansing
Date: 2008-08-23 13:22:19

I really like this story, it was very thrilling and very descriptive. 
 
I have to wonder, however. 
 
Have you ever seen the television show "Death Note"? I've seen a few episodes and the idea is very similar.

Title article: My Present
Date: 2008-08-23 10:01:30

Very sweet. 
 
The last stanza in a poem will generally characterize the entire poem as a whole. To me the last line made it seem like a 20th Anniversary Hallmark card. 
 
Other than that little bit, it was terrific.

Title article: HENPECKED HUSBAND
Date: 2008-08-21 09:23:17

I didn't particularly like it but I do applaud the rhyme scheme, it gave it a humorous demeanor.

Title article: The Undertakers- Part 1- Murderers
Date: 2008-08-21 09:08:55

actually i wrote and finished the two parts to the story, this one is fifteen chapters and the last one is only seven. ill post it up when i get the chance.

Title article: bottled UP
Date: 2008-08-20 21:30:27

I don't know for sure if this came from insight or not but it truly seemed as though it did. I read this poem once or twice, loving the park where "the tears came cascading". The excellent format of the story only added to its power. 
 
Keep up the incredible work.

Title article: The Dragon
Date: 2008-08-20 21:26:33

A really sweet but disturbing story.  
 
Surely you can't mean that true love is never possible. But I understand that it can rarely be served in such a careless and perfect manner

Title article: in your eyes *short*
Date: 2008-08-20 21:20:26

I'm not quite sure what to interpret from this one. 
 
Maybe about someone who thinks her friends are falsely commenting on her? (is that it?) 
 
Regardless, it had some rhythm in it and flowed relatively well. Short, but sweet.

Title article: I want to wait for you, but should I
Date: 2008-08-20 21:17:50

Alot of characteristics of writing potential emanate from this poem. I especially liked the turn in the mood, later in the story when she gets new hope, and hopefully she can learn something, maybe learn to guard her heart a little better. A little bit of spelling errors distracted me, but no biggie. Very good for a first poem. 
 
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Title article: SECOND SEX.
Date: 2008-08-20 20:42:12

This is an angle I didn't expect from you, but I really liked it. Not very graphic, which I respect, but at the same time it was very passionate, the scene you painted made it seem like hushed affection, almost unrequited. Thats just my take on it. 
 
Keep it up.

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Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/11/2008 19:37:38
It is good that you comment people frequently. There should be more of that.
I have tried to find your stories, and I found one and read/feedbacked it. If you could give me a list of which are stories, that would be awesome.
I liked the tone.
Hope you keep commenting others and helping them out, it's a good thing.
Hanna McCormack (extinct kiddo)

Chi-Townn
 Created On: 03/13/2008 19:07:43
hey thurr,
your stories and poems are great.
keep writing!
BGM (BGM)

 Created On: 03/12/2008 14:17:22
Edited By Jutta Motrin (CELL) On: 05/21/2008 11:16:27

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