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Jo (BritishRainDrop)
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About Myself: I am a student at Reaseheath College, a big animal lover and I am enthusiastic about writing, and for about 2 years I have been planning a story, Unfortunatley Unlucky but amazingly I haven't written any of it on paper yet, but have many of the events worked out in my head!

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Mar 11, 2008Unfortunatley Unlucky ~Part Two~Miscellaneous Stories 169
Mar 11, 2008In Memory Of Glenys Owen and Albert BlossPoetry 142
Mar 8, 2008Unfortunatley Unlucky ~ Part One~Miscellaneous Stories 338

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Title article: Unfortunatley Unlucky ~ Part One~
Date: 2008-03-09 09:16:15
Thanks guys!!!!
These comments have gave me a great boost, so thankyou!!! 
I read the bit about too many characters being introduced, and i think you might be right, but I aimed to try and show how close Ruby was to her friends, because for upcoming events, their bond is very important. Does anyone have any tips on how to show this while introducing the characters slower? 
 
Thank you guys!!!

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03/12/2008 10:58:31NOOOOOOOO! I am gonna murder my cat!!!!!!!!Off-Topic316
03/12/2008 12:22:23Re:NOOOOOOOO! I am gonna murder my cat!!!!!!!!Off-Topic316
03/12/2008 07:56:10What do YOU do when planning stories?Off-Topic1057

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