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Primal Need, Chapter 1

Primal Need - Chapter 1 Blood. The metallic...
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Amie Kerlin (lemon)
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Last Online 11/19/2008
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About Myself: I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Oct 27, 2008The Wine Wins AgainPoetry 348
Oct 22, 2008Affair's EndPoetry 279
Oct 12, 2008When I Think of YouMiscellaneous Stories 595
Sep 15, 2008The WaitressMiscellaneous Stories 1283
Aug 29, 2008A Lover's GardenPoetry 209
Aug 25, 2008Lemon: a HaikuPoetry 480
Aug 12, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 206
Aug 10, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 251
Aug 6, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 442
Aug 3, 2008Walking Along the ShorePoetry 289
Jul 30, 2008Stranded at SeaMiscellaneous Stories 325
Jul 26, 2008The Mexican Lasagna IncidentHumor 323
Jul 21, 2008All Liquid DietMiscellaneous Stories 341
Jul 20, 2008The PastPoetry 187
Jul 20, 2008Once AgainPoetry 192
Jul 16, 2008On The MendPoetry 190
Jul 13, 2008This Internal PoisonPoetry 270
Jul 13, 2008The OnePoetry 271
Jul 12, 2008A Bad DayPoetry 239
Jul 11, 2008The Reluctant LoverMiscellaneous Stories 485
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Books

TitleDate
Lemon Juice and PoetryAug 2, 2008

Comments

Title article: Love In Vein
Date: 2008-09-27 21:48:08

This was very good. i dont think i've read any of your stuff before, but this was very well written and you did great with the dialog.  
 
i like how the guy didnt REALLY want to turn even though he loves her.  
nice touch with the poem at the end. i really liked it. =]

Title article: Blue Sky
Date: 2008-09-27 21:36:19

The imagery in this poem was really very good. i could 'see' this poem very clearly in my minds eye.  
 
very, very nice job! Keep these coming. 
 
=]

Title article: The Mechanical Beast
Date: 2008-09-27 21:33:01

Good job.. I liked the way you related mechanics (cold, without feeling) to a person. I thought this was done very well and with no wasted words.  
 
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Title article: Suggestion
Date: 2008-09-27 19:45:29

Stories about Annorexia are very disturbing.. I wrote one called 'The all liquid diet' and it freaked me out when i wrote that.  
 
Nice job though and kudos to you for writing about such a touchy subject. =]

Title article: An Undeniable Truth
Date: 2008-09-27 19:40:31

Great story! I like reading these kinds of stories and Scooby, I too got a little upset at Pilgrim for walking ahead of you lol.  
 
anyway, I'm glad you found the truth on that trip =]

Title article: To all the Young Lovers
Date: 2008-09-27 19:31:14

This was very well written and told an excellent story of love.  
 
My mom-ness is going on overload lately though from my oldest daughter disappearing for awhile and i SO did not need to think she was naked in some dude's attic though haha eeep! o.0

Title article: Love Crawls Down the Drain
Date: 2008-09-27 19:13:02

THAT was funny. reminds me of those urban legend shows. there was one about a lady who had spider eggs in her hair.. yeah when they hatched they were in her eyes and stuff ... its really too bad that story turned out to be an urban legend. =]

Title article: Ken Masters News
Date: 2008-09-27 19:07:18

oh my gosh lol 
 
this was... yeah... interesting.... haha.  
 
well.. i hope THIS story wasn't based on a true story, because you know, that would just be way too much information Jason hahaha

Title article: Customer Service
Date: 2008-09-27 19:00:51

I'm so afraid to ask how this story was based on a true story.. did you actually check in some dude wearing a pink dress, or did you ask a woman if you could touch her cat? either way its frightening. haha =|

Title article: Are you plagued by happiness?
Date: 2008-09-27 18:54:32

ahaha! funny stuff. you forgot the standard side effects of diarrhea, constipation, heart disease, and genital warts.  
 
I love it when you do these 'ads'. they're great..oh crap that sounded way to cheerful.. better get my depstronomine refilled right away! =] ..wait i mean =[

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 11/03/2008 06:19:58
Ha! Sounds like YOU were having a good time. I had to wait 20 minutes in the drive thru (while nervously looking at my hotel) but the food was fresh and I didn't miss any calls. I was going to mail some of it out to California but then I remembered that you owe me mail. Mail me some old rotting food and I will return the favor.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 11/01/2008 21:44:12
Ramen should be packaged everywhere and givin with everything. Because its just that good.

I just ate some greasy McDonalds. It wasn't as gross as usual.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 11/01/2008 19:52:20
Agreed. Some things just shouldn't be packaged and sold. Like ranch.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/30/2008 16:04:28
You ever try the Camo 40's? Fucking nasty! I was poor one night and promised myself I would never be that poor again.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/30/2008 11:56:41
Hey I was handling that parked car like a pro.

Dan and I tried making a crude version of a white russian. We used vodka, chocolate, coffee flavor, and milk. We called it the Red Moose. Definitely a one or two drink deal. Afterwards you're too bloated to even get drunk. Not exactly the best drink. But a good one off starter!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 10/29/2008 12:09:16
No it is not a bad thing. Entertaining the folks around here is what we strive for, and it looks like we've done our part.

No but really, I catch you on my lawn again, I'm calling the cops. Goddamn hoodlums...

What are you stuck on with the story? Dude/lady gets stockholm, dressses up as a lemon, and robs some shit. Simple.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/28/2008 14:16:08
Oh I'm a fancy drinker. Love that box stuff. You know you do too lemon! And I'm not talking about wine.

Actually I am.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/28/2008 11:51:44
So sorry to have missed out on your buzzin lemon. And to answer your question I do work. I'm just addicted to wikipedia again. Got back on the horse.

Sooooooooo I'm still waiting for my package in the mail. What'd you send me? A box of wine perhaps?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 10/24/2008 19:39:10
Stop being so vague.
Stop asking questions.
Why can't you answer my questions?
Oh I can.
But you don't.
Exactly.
Jesus.....
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 10/24/2008 10:03:30
Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 10/24/2008 10:04:58
Yeah, especially if you say it to your friend Zack, who's married to somebody named Miri.

This poster cracks me up everytime I look at it. (pay attention towards the bottom of it

CLICK ME HARD!
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