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Member Since	03/06/2008
Last Online	10/11/2008
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About Myself:

I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 15, 2008	The Waitress	Miscellaneous Stories	1098
Aug 29, 2008	A Lover's Garden	Poetry	149
Aug 25, 2008	Lemon: a Haiku	Poetry	392
Aug 12, 2008	The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 3	Miscellaneous Stories	157
Aug 10, 2008	The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 2	Miscellaneous Stories	180
Aug 6, 2008	The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	379
Aug 3, 2008	Walking Along the Shore	Poetry	205
Jul 30, 2008	Stranded at Sea	Miscellaneous Stories	239
Jul 26, 2008	The Mexican Lasagna Incident	Humor	275
Jul 21, 2008	All Liquid Diet	Miscellaneous Stories	297
Jul 20, 2008	The Past	Poetry	142
Jul 20, 2008	Once Again	Poetry	141
Jul 16, 2008	On The Mend	Poetry	146
Jul 13, 2008	This Internal Poison	Poetry	212
Jul 13, 2008	The One	Poetry	226
Jul 12, 2008	A Bad Day	Poetry	188
Jul 11, 2008	The Reluctant Lover	Miscellaneous Stories	428
Jul 10, 2008	Blind	Poetry	167
Jul 9, 2008	Life's Little Games	Poetry	164
Jul 9, 2008	Insanity of the Sane	Poetry	172

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Books

Title	Date
Lemon Juice and Poetry	Aug 2, 2008

Comments

Title article: Portoshit, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-09-18 11:58:42

lol ok, that was funny. that was a good plan to blame it on the 'imaginary douchebags' rather than take the heat. Wonder what's going to happen next?

=]

Title article: A Very Bad Boy
Date: 2008-09-17 13:02:45

This was pretty good. You did great at hinting that he'd been around for a long time.

I liked the small details that you have in this story. A good read.

=]

Title article: The Waitress
Date: 2008-09-17 12:32:42

Julian..almost ALL of my stories end like this lol :)

thanks for the comments everybody.

Title article: The Portoshit-Chapter 1, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-17 11:03:24

It has potential to be funny, but I ended up skimming over the basketball dialog to get to the funny part...which perhaps is in the next chapter?

Maybe you can fix the tedium in re-write =]

Title article: Funny You Should Say That
Date: 2008-09-17 10:58:35

Funny stuff Phil. :)

my grandmother used to say 'Holy shit n' Shinola' I have no idea what that means haha. But she used to say it all the time. She also used to yell at us to get out-then promptly spell out O-U-G!

whatever lol =]

Title article: A Twilight Sky
Date: 2008-09-16 18:15:53

Nicely done! I really liked this. I liked how it started with 'And' so that it felt like the reader was joining in with the narrator during that moment.

This sounds pretty cool, I think it's going in my favorites =]

Title article: The Dry Well
Date: 2008-09-16 18:11:24

Very cool story. :)

Like Max though, I wonder why the werewolves didn't just break through the door, but still, it was a good one. I actually didn't expect werewolves... just regular wolves =]

Title article: destination's traveling days
Date: 2008-09-16 14:12:15

Hey man, I'm sure Dr. Suess got a lot of crap for his books too... lol

So did you use these nonsense words on purpose or were they just mistakes? That makes all the difference here.

Title article: Limerick
Date: 2008-09-16 14:03:22

I thought it was good for a limerick. I love them for their quick wit and humor. I know I'm always writing them in cards and whatnot for the person receiving them so that its more personal.
At least she identified it as a limerick in the title so it wasnt like she was saying "read this magnificent poem i've constructed"

Title article: Picture This
Date: 2008-09-16 14:00:15

This is a really intriguing story. I really liked the whole thing. Yeah, it kind of had a Final Destination feel, but it was good.

Good job with the ending, how it just cuts off.

=]

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
10/11/2008 10:30:56	Re:The forum monopolizes my time	Off-Topic	425
10/11/2008 10:29:30	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314770
10/10/2008 16:26:24	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314770
10/10/2008 16:24:58	Re:The forum monopolizes my time	Off-Topic	425
10/10/2008 16:17:26	Re:The forum monopolizes my time	Off-Topic	425
10/10/2008 16:14:08	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314770
09/24/2008 13:30:01	Re:Hi.	Off-Topic	4199
09/24/2008 13:28:23	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314770
09/24/2008 12:05:13	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314770
09/24/2008 11:57:50	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	314770

Connection

Amie Kerlin (lemon)'s connections

J.L. (the Processor)

Amy Carter (scooby)

Project 30 (Project 30)

jesse (jesse2008)

fabian villegas (fevilleg)

Jessica S,A. (Forsaken)

Jamie Steatham (Lord Pinkington)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 10/11/2008 15:44:48 Sup, lemon lime?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 19:41:40 I was just on the freecreditreport website .... damn i was so close to signing you up .... why do zombies have to be so nice? it isn't fair!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 19:32:05 Hey, hey, you don't want to do anything you might regret, do you?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 18:01:20 I'll sign you up for the NAMBLA newsletter ... North American Marlon Brando Look Alikes
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 13:50:16 SPAM!!! ha! told you i'd get you back
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/22/2008 08:28:59 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 09/22/2008 15:25:20 I know ..... i should really start doing that. I mean, you can never have enough pictures of Lemons ....... I'm writing a story about a zombie who mugs a human ....... it's called Pauly Shore Is Undead.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 21:36:41 Yeah, because it's normal to just randomly search for pictures of Lemons ... Are you really going to write the story?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 19:37:15 seriously, is there like a website devoted to making different pictures of lemons?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 13:03:10 Write a story about a hitman wearing a lemon suit who murders the freecreditreport.com guy. That'd be entertaining.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 03:04:46 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 09/21/2008 03:05:14 Oh yeah, to answer your question: "The Purple Beneath" is what's next for me. But you haven't answered MY question. What's next for YOU?

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