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Amie Kerlin (lemon)
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Member Since 03/06/2008
Last Online 09/07/2008
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About Myself: I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 2, 2008No PressuresPoetry 159
Jul 1, 2008A Mom's View of SummerHumor 198
Jun 29, 2008Don't put me in the same boxPoetry 324
Jun 28, 2008Unwanted PraisePoetry 308
Jun 26, 2008Amanda's Freedom (conclusion)Miscellaneous Stories 207
Jun 24, 2008ShePoetry 126
Jun 24, 2008Amanda's FreedomMiscellaneous Stories 162
Jun 23, 2008untitled story part 3Miscellaneous Stories 81
Jun 23, 2008A letter to DadMiscellaneous Stories 110
Jun 2, 2008[untitled] part twoMiscellaneous Stories 128
May 28, 2008Isabelle's kissesPoetry 140
May 27, 2008Chicken Feathers part 1Horror 126
May 27, 2008Untitled story [introduction]Miscellaneous Stories 162
May 23, 2008The Three WomenMiscellaneous Stories 386
May 23, 2008OuchPoetry 213
May 21, 2008Blood on the TileHorror 370
May 21, 2008ScreamingPoetry 178
May 21, 2008The Long WalkMiscellaneous Stories 205
Mar 11, 2008A Mother's Rant part 2Humor 220
Mar 10, 2008A Mothers Rant about life part 1Humor 275

Books

TitleDate
Lemon Juice and PoetryAug 2, 2008

Comments

Total number of comments: 819

Title article: Tip the Option
Date: 2008-09-07 18:00:53

oh my gosh. i've got a hair appointment in about a week and i KNOW i'm going to think about this when i'm sitting in 'THE CHAIR' thanks a lot Jason haha. 
 
 
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Title article: BREAKING through the SuRfAcE
Date: 2008-09-07 17:49:36

very nice job. this was very cool. the word placement only added to the poem's effectiveness.  
Putting your heart out there is a hard thing to do, especially if its been stepped on and broken many times before.  
 
Great poem =]

Title article: Rendition Of A Rose
Date: 2008-09-07 17:46:38

Clever poem. I liked how you fit the fruits of the spirit in this. These poems of yours are very ingenious. it's great that your images created by the words actually have something to do with the poem and not just 'look i can make a picture' lol 
 
Great job =]

Title article: Through Open Eyes
Date: 2008-09-07 17:43:16

This was beautiful. The rain has certain qualities about it that can either wash away the dreariness or it can do the total opposite and bring the dreariness to a new level. this was a wonderful poem. i liked how you used the rain to describe how the person felt.  
 
Great job =]

Title article: Rage
Date: 2008-09-07 17:39:19

Nicely done. I like the way you took this and kind of made it a lesson. This was really good. 
 
It did leave one question for me to ask though: He realized his rage, but did he still hit her in the end? 
 
keep it coming =]

Title article: The Lighthouse
Date: 2008-09-07 17:37:03

very cool! I like how you did the 'I am the light of the world' as the LIGHT from the lighthouse your poem creates.  
You're getting pretty good at these 
 
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Title article: Blue Melancholia
Date: 2008-09-07 17:35:13

I thought this was good. I liked how you wrote this as if you were kind of talking to yourself. it was a different kind of poem. Nice job. 
 
Keep it comin =]

Title article: Where I Belong
Date: 2008-09-05 16:21:43

This was great! through the whole thing you were explaining about past relationships then the ray of hope is there at the end. I liked this very much.

Title article: The Thief -- A Haiku
Date: 2008-09-04 17:33:54

it was easy to grasp what you were saying, so i'm going to say that its a good haiku.  
 
I can't seem to get them to make any actual sense when i write them, i guess i just need more words =]

Title article: Approaching Storm
Date: 2008-09-04 17:31:51

very cool! I really like how you have been using visual aspects as well as the imagery in your poems lately. These make for excellent poems Mr. McCandless. 
 
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OFFLINE Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)
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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 09/04/2008 13:17:59

Yeah go get that medicine amie!

And don't forget to mail me some too.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 09/04/2008 12:54:57

Now I'm sure that this won't surprise you but when I'm feeling sick I just drink some whiskey to kill the germs. A lot of whiskey. The next day I always feel better (as long as I allow myself enough sleep) and bow down to give thanks to our Lord and God. Yep. I sure do. So go get yourself some whiskey amie and don't forget to pick up your kids from school.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

not on the sickbed
Created On: 09/04/2008 12:51:15

Oh, well that's where you're wrong, Amie. Not smacking your balls on doorknobs is just not normal.

Get with the times

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 09/04/2008 12:01:54

NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! Not lemons amie please!!! I have Pledge alright. I know what lemons smell like. Besides I don't want your rotted fruit in my mailbox. We just vacuumed it.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 09/02/2008 19:03:21

Yeah mail me something. I love getting stuff in the mail. Like anthrax. Someone was kind enough to send me some and I got fucked up for weeks. I went to a doctor later cuz I wasn't feeling well and he told me that I should be dead. So I just threw my hands in the air and yelled, "I beat death! My body is kickass!" And then he said I'd be getting another package in the mail. It was kind of weird.......

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 09/02/2008 15:16:24

Hell yeah I want you to mail me stuff. Here's a list of some of the stuff you should send me:
Sleep, food, money, hair, fingernails, socks, skin, a child, movies, clown make-up, furniture cleaner, candy, alcohol, cigarettes, wacky tobacky, pillows.

I could go on forever but I think I'll let you get caught up on the list before I start adding more. Come on amie hop to it!

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 09/02/2008 12:20:58

I'm not drunk today. Woooo!! But I'm still uber tired. My unemployed roommate is on the couch right now prbably taking a nap and watching Sonny Chiba movies. That bastard.

Well I'm glad that you got so much sleep amie. Maybe you should put some in an envelope and mail it to me so I'm not so low. Come on amie, mail me some sleep. I'll give you more merlot.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 09/01/2008 03:31:44

Oh my God I did it again. So there I was last night about an hour away from going to bed when my friend calls telling me he's having a going away party at a bar near my house. I'm surprised even though he had left me a text two days prior that I dismissed almost immediately. So I go, get the taste, and stay up two hours before I'm suppossed to be at work. So I show up here 8 minutes late, drive some angry pilots to the airport, and now I'm left sitting on this stool trying not to fall asleep while the good people eat their breakfast. God I hate mornings.

P.S. I can't even go to sleep when I get off! I have to go and see some people that claim to be my family and desire my presence for 24 hours. How dare they right? Taking up MY precious time all because they have to fulfill whatever kind of secret agenda they have planned for my benevolent soul.

P.Sx2 I'm using your page more as an outlet than a correspondence. So feel free not to reply to my bitching. God I just wish I could go back to sleep sometime today....

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/29/2008 20:44:15

You just take out two little chunks one on the top and one on the hey wait! I'm not going to explain how to use fruit! You're trying to incriminate me aren't you!? Now this could just be paranoia but I think you have a secret agenda you're not telling me about. Just what are you conspiring?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/28/2008 16:37:12

Hahahaha thanks for sharing that information with me lemon. I'll give share some back. I've used fruit. That's right fruit. I could smoke the shit out of your lemons.

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