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Amie Kerlin (lemon)
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Last Online 07/08/2008
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About Myself: I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 3, 2008The ArticleMiscellaneous Stories 142
Jul 2, 2008No PressuresPoetry 100
Jul 1, 2008A Mom's View of SummerHumor 83
Jun 29, 2008Don't put me in the same boxPoetry 177
Jun 28, 2008Unwanted PraisePoetry 199
Jun 26, 2008Amanda's Freedom (conclusion)Miscellaneous Stories 136
Jun 24, 2008ShePoetry 80
Jun 24, 2008Amanda's FreedomMiscellaneous Stories 93
Jun 23, 2008untitled story part 3Miscellaneous Stories 40
Jun 23, 2008A letter to DadMiscellaneous Stories 59
Jun 2, 2008[untitled] part twoMiscellaneous Stories 90
May 28, 2008Isabelle's kissesPoetry 104
May 27, 2008Chicken Feathers part 1Horror 91
May 27, 2008Untitled story [introduction]Miscellaneous Stories 119
May 23, 2008The Three WomenMiscellaneous Stories 325
May 23, 2008OuchPoetry 160
May 21, 2008Blood on the TileHorror 323
May 21, 2008ScreamingPoetry 124
May 21, 2008The Long WalkMiscellaneous Stories 161
Mar 11, 2008A Mother's Rant part 2Humor 172
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07/08/2008 23:05:34Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?Off-Topic112
07/08/2008 20:28:21Re:SuggestionOff-Topic1323
07/08/2008 20:25:57Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?Off-Topic112
07/08/2008 20:14:06Re:Ways to Annoy PeopleOff-Topic762
07/08/2008 12:55:13Re:SuggestionOff-Topic1323
07/07/2008 20:33:18Re:whoa, hold the phone!Off-Topic110
07/07/2008 20:32:32Re:Anywhere in the WorldOff-Topic516
07/07/2008 20:30:34Re:SuggestionOff-Topic1323
07/07/2008 20:26:11Re:whoa, hold the phone!Off-Topic110
07/07/2008 20:07:04Re:whoa, hold the phone!Off-Topic110

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OFFLINE Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)
OFFLINE Billy (Vango)
OFFLINE Philip Neale (philneale1952)
ONLINE Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)
ONLINE Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)
OFFLINE Dipankar Dasgupta (d.dasgupta)
OFFLINE JD Kelly (Juda)
 

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Heanor if you can find it
 Created On: 07/03/2008 10:08:04
You write on my wall, I'll write on yours. Gosh that feels better now I've shaved all that fur off.

Hi Annie (like to do things back to front sometimes).
Jamie Steatham (flossy)

Baghdad
 Created On: 06/30/2008 05:46:00
Edited By Jamie Steatham (flossy) On: 06/30/2008 05:46:20
Just thought I would stalk you.Will put some stories up under another name soon.I will give you a Great mind you have Amie.Keep up the good work.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

a wasteland
 Created On: 06/29/2008 21:33:58
ha! i'm the first to sign.

Now, for some words of wisdom...oh man i dont have any! no, wait, i think i might have somehting. no, shit, i lost it

Comments

Total number of comments: 373

Title article: Pulled Apart
Date: 2008-07-08 23:33:52

This was really great! You start out kind of morose, then at the end you seem to gain hope. I love how you aren't afraid to put something of yourself in each of your poems. It gives us all a glimpse of the person you are. =]

Title article: Docs
Date: 2008-07-08 16:33:25

This was a good story. I had a pair of Docs in high school that I LOVED. I wore those things thin, then I had a similar experience with the flappy sole. haha!

Title article: The Gift
Date: 2008-07-08 16:24:40

I thought it was interesting, except for the nipple observation..that was just funny. I have one question about the story though, at the end when the bum says he's sorry.. Is he saying he's sorry for telling an atheist God bless you? Or is he saying he's sorry that the guy IS an athiest?

Title article: Wiggedy Wack
Date: 2008-07-08 16:11:33

OK! this was interesting lol. very different for you eh? Well it brought a giggle out of me. love the title 'wiggety whack' =]

Title article: Death
Date: 2008-07-08 16:03:52
Revelation 6:8
Just in case anyone was wondering: Revelation 6:8(NIV)I looked, and there before me was a pale horse! Its rider was named Death, and Hades was following close behind him. They were given power over a fourth of the earth to kill by sword, famine, and plague, and by the wild beasts of the earth.  
I thought this was the best of the 'Death' poems :) Great job

Title article: The Article
Date: 2008-07-08 13:13:50
What really happened.
The mom was jealous of the 'pretty auburn hair' and the ribbons. so when she saw the ribbon poking out from the hat, she snapped and beat her with the rolling pin, put her in the trunk of her car and drove her to the northern side of town instead of the southern side like she said. After all of this, she still continued to bake the pies and even sent them to the bakery sale. THE END lol

Title article: Thought's of my Soul
Date: 2008-07-07 20:55:40

This was interesting. I'll agree with Punk, it was a little creepy the way you said 'The stranger in your soul. And the reason for the cold.' Coldness is associated with death or desolation. Grood job =]

Title article: To Get Back To The Start
Date: 2008-07-07 20:53:19

Well done! this one was really melancholy eh? I loved the lines 'A song where the lyrics find their way to your heart To the point where you're dying to get back to the start' Great Job as always =]

Title article: The River
Date: 2008-07-07 20:50:39

This was good, I really enjoyed it. Your poetry always seems effortless. =]

Title article: O What A Symphony
Date: 2008-07-07 20:49:02

I liked this. The poem seemed to start out lazily and then pick up faster in the middle then slow back down at the end. GREAT. I only found one spelling error: Eckoing should be Echoing

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