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Amie Kerlin (lemon)
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Member Since 03/06/2008
Last Online 08/21/2008
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About Myself: I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 12, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 74
Aug 10, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 111
Aug 6, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 277
Aug 3, 2008Walking Along the ShorePoetry 113
Jul 30, 2008Stranded at SeaMiscellaneous Stories 136
Jul 26, 2008The Mexican Lasagna IncidentHumor 199
Jul 21, 2008All Liquid DietMiscellaneous Stories 223
Jul 20, 2008The PastPoetry 99
Jul 20, 2008Once AgainPoetry 103
Jul 16, 2008On The MendPoetry 109
Jul 13, 2008This Internal PoisonPoetry 165
Jul 13, 2008The OnePoetry 175
Jul 12, 2008A Bad DayPoetry 135
Jul 11, 2008The Reluctant LoverMiscellaneous Stories 366
Jul 10, 2008BlindPoetry 123
Jul 9, 2008Life's Little GamesPoetry 117
Jul 9, 2008Insanity of the SanePoetry 121
Jul 3, 2008The ArticleMiscellaneous Stories 293
Jul 2, 2008No PressuresPoetry 140
Jul 1, 2008A Mom's View of SummerHumor 175
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Books

TitleDate
Lemon Juice and PoetryAug 2, 2008

Comments

Title article: bottled UP
Date: 2008-08-19 20:28:44

I like this poem. This format is fun to do, at least i think. You showed some real emotion in this piece and the visual stimulation only added to its greatness. =]

Title article: Dancer in the Music Box
Date: 2008-08-19 20:26:07

well that was frightening. I've always been spooked by the ballerinas or whatever in music boxes so i have no problem believing that one could suck the living soul out of someone.  
 
I'm scared now.

Title article: Bittersweet Soldering
Date: 2008-08-19 20:23:23

interesting. well i bet she had a time finishing up in the bathroom stall since she was crying lol..  
 
the dialog was easy and believable. I just hope I never run into anyone playing solo in the restroom :-|

Title article: The Darkness Inside
Date: 2008-08-19 19:34:40

Great poem. you've captured the depression very well in this poem. I liked that you didnt rhyme in it but you kept the flow going easy. great piece =]

Title article: Crash
Date: 2008-08-19 19:32:14

Nice. I thought you were talking about an airplane crashing. Never expected the alien twist. the only thing I would suggest changing is the way you flip from past to present tense.

Title article: Tears from a Burnt Cigar
Date: 2008-08-19 18:05:13

You never cease to amaze me with your writing Max. This was excellently written. the flow was easy and your wording was perfect.  
screams from a  
demon silhouette, 
agony from a 
possessed statuette, 
thinking of  
anything to forget 
the burning of 
the cigarette 
 
Intense. =]

Title article: Losing Everything
Date: 2008-08-19 18:00:44

Great poem depicting a loss of someone. Its so frustrating when we lose a friend or a significant other especially if you were very close to them. It sucks to know they are still out there doing their own thing without you, while you're left in their wake. Good job =]

Title article: Blind Faith, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-19 17:56:45

yeah, this story was great as usual =]  
 
Your stories are always so well planned out that whatever happens in the end comes as a shock, but its feasible.

Title article: The Void, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-19 17:45:59

It was an interesting beginning. I think the dialog between John and Kang got a little confusing. the correct way would be: 
"I'm offering you a date!" 
"Ms. Kang,"John said....... 
start a new line when a different person speaks.  
 
Good start though =]

Title article: Darkening, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-08-19 17:39:12

I think this was a good beginning for a longer story because like darrinbouley, I am left with a lot of questions. I'll be waiting for the next installment =]

Forum


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08/21/2008 18:48:06Re:THATS IT!! I CALL ShenanigansOff-Topic161
08/21/2008 18:44:49Re:Any Nightmare Before Christmas fans out there?Off-Topic585
08/21/2008 17:41:18Re:Any Nightmare Before Christmas fans out there?Off-Topic585
08/21/2008 17:33:13Re:THATS IT!! I CALL ShenanigansOff-Topic161
08/21/2008 17:20:52Re:THATS IT!! I CALL ShenanigansOff-Topic161
08/21/2008 17:06:43Re:THATS IT!! I CALL ShenanigansOff-Topic161
08/21/2008 17:04:13Re:Any Nightmare Before Christmas fans out there?Off-Topic585
08/21/2008 17:01:35Re:THATS IT!! I CALL ShenanigansOff-Topic161
08/21/2008 16:56:43Re:THATS IT!! I CALL ShenanigansOff-Topic161
08/21/2008 16:49:21Re:Any Nightmare Before Christmas fans out there?Off-Topic585

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OFFLINE Jessica S,A. (Forsaken)
OFFLINE Jamie Steatham (flossy)
OFFLINE Michelle Huff (allmine)
OFFLINE Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)
ONLINE Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)
OFFLINE Billy (Vango)
OFFLINE Philip Neale (philneale1952)
 
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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 19:01:25
Edited By Jason Haugh (Something Indecent) On: 08/21/2008 19:02:00
You don't even play the game do you? You just have him jump in front of cars and get runover.

You can't blame him though. I mean, you DID have his controller in your hand...

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 17:31:39
What did the digital frog ever do to you? Oh yeah........I forgot about that one incident. Sorry for bringing up your shameful past.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 15:41:25
Hahahahaha. I don't think BR plays that one anymore. Good song though.

Countries manufacture bombs and guns
to kill your brother for something he hasn't even done

I wish I was writing stuff like that in highschool. Most of my stuff was void of intellect and read like it was on a sugar high. But luckily now I've gotten out of that stint......

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 14:48:23
Oh my God you put that on my profile!!! Quickly change the M to an R. We were talking about Retallica. *shifts eyes from side to side* Nobodies getting sued here.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 14:28:34
Yeah their new stuff pisses me off. They used to be so good. Now they just need to stop making music.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 13:16:12
What about Dominated Love Slave. Tre sings that great.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/21/2008 11:41:43
Hey thanks for dumping that assload of lyrics on my page. That's digital littering and someday if I have my way it'll be a crime. And you'll be fined $5. Muahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!

But yeah that was a funny song. Haven't listened to it forever.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 18:33:09
lol I bet you have!

But seriously. Those 16 year old kids aren't still harrassing you are they?
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 17:48:30
Never limp are my noodles. Strong and hard they are. Defeat you they will.
Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

 Created On: 08/19/2008 16:31:50
Your meat tenderizers, scare me they don't. Sharpening my noodles I have. Ready for blood they are.
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