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Member Since	03/06/2008
Last Online	10/12/2008
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About Myself:

I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories

Published Short Stories

Date	Title	Category	Hits
Sep 15, 2008	The Waitress	Miscellaneous Stories	1101
Aug 29, 2008	A Lover's Garden	Poetry	150
Aug 25, 2008	Lemon: a Haiku	Poetry	392
Aug 12, 2008	The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 3	Miscellaneous Stories	158
Aug 10, 2008	The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 2	Miscellaneous Stories	180
Aug 6, 2008	The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1	Miscellaneous Stories	379
Aug 3, 2008	Walking Along the Shore	Poetry	206
Jul 30, 2008	Stranded at Sea	Miscellaneous Stories	239
Jul 26, 2008	The Mexican Lasagna Incident	Humor	275
Jul 21, 2008	All Liquid Diet	Miscellaneous Stories	297
Jul 20, 2008	The Past	Poetry	142
Jul 20, 2008	Once Again	Poetry	142
Jul 16, 2008	On The Mend	Poetry	146
Jul 13, 2008	This Internal Poison	Poetry	213
Jul 13, 2008	The One	Poetry	226
Jul 12, 2008	A Bad Day	Poetry	188
Jul 11, 2008	The Reluctant Lover	Miscellaneous Stories	428
Jul 10, 2008	Blind	Poetry	167
Jul 9, 2008	Life's Little Games	Poetry	164
Jul 9, 2008	Insanity of the Sane	Poetry	173

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Books

Title	Date
Lemon Juice and Poetry	Aug 2, 2008

Comments

Title article: Finders Keepers
Date: 2008-09-27 00:23:55

This was really good Phil! I liked how you used the fog so that the reader knew what was happening. I only have one question though and that is, Why did he end up going back in time in the first place?

Great job though =]

Title article: You Want What?
Date: 2008-09-23 10:06:42

haha that was pretty funny. I like these dialog pieces, they are quick reads and usually funny. Keep them coming =]

Title article: The Purple Beneath, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-09-23 09:45:14

very horror film-ish Max! Nicely done. I thought at first that you were going to go the 'bear attack' route when I was reading the part about the wilderness coming to life. Can't wait for the next chapter =]

Title article: Please, Come Home. Please.
Date: 2008-09-23 09:36:12

Wow.. This was very intense. I felt horrible for Thomas and for what happened to his love. Love like that is hard to find indeed.

You have a talent for writing the most moving stories. Great Job. *pass the tissues please* lol
=]

Title article: Blue Room
Date: 2008-09-21 19:23:47

I remember reading this when you first posted it.. It was great then, and it's great now. I like the way you describe things in this tale and the way you have given depth to the characters.

Very nicely done =]

Title article: Bleeding Sea
Date: 2008-09-21 19:18:36

Another great one for you.

This one was very pensive. Don't forget that we grow in life to be different than how we were, but its scary when we feel like we've lost ourselves completely and feel that we've completely detached from our former person.

Title article: miss led lives
Date: 2008-09-20 22:05:00

I liked this. When I read it, I pictured a voice not a person, in a blank room speaking in monotone. I thought this was really good. It evoked some feelings of melancholy and some helpless feelings when I read it.

nice =]

Title article: Survival, Chapter 20
Date: 2008-09-19 23:13:26

Allmine, great ending. I liked that mrs. Q was the admin's ex wife lol. Its always so funny to see the direction each writer will go in their chapters. its cool to see a writer go in a completely different direction than usual.

This was fun! If we want to do another one, I'll help any way I can =]

Title article: Survival, Chapter 19
Date: 2008-09-19 23:07:16

YES! I successfully organized a UFC fight on a deserted island!
you're so damn funny.
loved how Max was looking for someone to eat while you were 'grave' robbing haha.

Title article: Survival, Chapter 17
Date: 2008-09-19 23:01:48

This WAS an eerie chapter. It almost seemed like 'the women' were a little off eh? At first I thought you were going to write in some hanky panky haha!

=]

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Forum

Last 10 Forum Posts

Date	Subject	Category	Hits
10/12/2008 11:06:40	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	315002
10/11/2008 10:30:56	Re:The forum monopolizes my time	Off-Topic	435
10/11/2008 10:29:30	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	315002
10/10/2008 16:26:24	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	315002
10/10/2008 16:24:58	Re:The forum monopolizes my time	Off-Topic	435
10/10/2008 16:17:26	Re:The forum monopolizes my time	Off-Topic	435
10/10/2008 16:14:08	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	315002
09/24/2008 13:30:01	Re:Hi.	Off-Topic	4205
09/24/2008 13:28:23	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	315002
09/24/2008 12:05:13	Re:Proclaim Your Royalty	Off-Topic	315002

Connection

Amie Kerlin (lemon)'s connections

J.L. (the Processor)

Amy Carter (scooby)

Project 30 (Project 30)

jesse (jesse2008)

fabian villegas (fevilleg)

Jessica S,A. (Forsaken)

Jamie Steatham (Lord Pinkington)

Michelle Huff (allmine)

Matthew Daniel Carter (Pilgrim)

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

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Guestbook

Name	Entry
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 10/11/2008 15:44:48 Sup, lemon lime?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 19:41:40 I was just on the freecreditreport website .... damn i was so close to signing you up .... why do zombies have to be so nice? it isn't fair!
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 19:32:05 Hey, hey, you don't want to do anything you might regret, do you?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 18:01:20 I'll sign you up for the NAMBLA newsletter ... North American Marlon Brando Look Alikes
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/27/2008 13:50:16 SPAM!!! ha! told you i'd get you back
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/22/2008 08:28:59 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 09/22/2008 15:25:20 I know ..... i should really start doing that. I mean, you can never have enough pictures of Lemons ....... I'm writing a story about a zombie who mugs a human ....... it's called Pauly Shore Is Undead.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 21:36:41 Yeah, because it's normal to just randomly search for pictures of Lemons ... Are you really going to write the story?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 19:37:15 seriously, is there like a website devoted to making different pictures of lemons?
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 13:03:10 Write a story about a hitman wearing a lemon suit who murders the freecreditreport.com guy. That'd be entertaining.
Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)	Created On: 09/21/2008 03:04:46 Edited By Max Booth III (Zombie Punk) On: 09/21/2008 03:05:14 Oh yeah, to answer your question: "The Purple Beneath" is what's next for me. But you haven't answered MY question. What's next for YOU?

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