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Amie Kerlin (lemon)
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Last Online 08/28/2008
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About Myself: I write random things that come to me when I least expect them.
I'm not a dark person, but for whatever reason a lot of my writing is dark. Leave me comments so that I can improve-- If we don't get criticized, we can't grow. :)

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 25, 2008Lemon: a HaikuPoetry 139
Aug 12, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 3Miscellaneous Stories 85
Aug 10, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 118
Aug 6, 2008The Story of a Survivor, Chapter 1Miscellaneous Stories 286
Aug 3, 2008Walking Along the ShorePoetry 131
Jul 30, 2008Stranded at SeaMiscellaneous Stories 147
Jul 26, 2008The Mexican Lasagna IncidentHumor 211
Jul 21, 2008All Liquid DietMiscellaneous Stories 234
Jul 20, 2008The PastPoetry 102
Jul 20, 2008Once AgainPoetry 108
Jul 16, 2008On The MendPoetry 113
Jul 13, 2008This Internal PoisonPoetry 170
Jul 13, 2008The OnePoetry 184
Jul 12, 2008A Bad DayPoetry 142
Jul 11, 2008The Reluctant LoverMiscellaneous Stories 379
Jul 10, 2008BlindPoetry 127
Jul 9, 2008Life's Little GamesPoetry 119
Jul 9, 2008Insanity of the SanePoetry 123
Jul 3, 2008The ArticleMiscellaneous Stories 297
Jul 2, 2008No PressuresPoetry 143
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Books

TitleDate
Lemon Juice and PoetryAug 2, 2008

Comments

Total number of comments: 798

Title article: Befitting the Undead
Date: 2008-08-28 21:28:06

I thought it was good Jason. the rhyme schemes changing wasnt bad actually.  
When i first saw the title i thought for sure it was going to be zombie porn, but thank God it wasnt lol 
 
Does this mean there will be more myspace recordings soon? those are REALLY funny! 
 
=]

Title article: I just wanna move on!
Date: 2008-08-28 21:24:56

Very well done with the emotional aspect. Its always hard when people in our lives whether friends or significant others, leave us behind.  
 
I'd run a spell check just to get those few pesky words spelled wrong out of the beautiful poem. =]

Title article: A Woman We called "MAMA"
Date: 2008-08-28 21:21:04

That was a really heartfelt story. I'm thankful that my mother is still around and still young! she's only 51 :) 
I think that you accurately described the emotions that come with the death of someones mother though. Good job =]

Title article: ALL SHOOK UP.
Date: 2008-08-28 17:19:15

this was excellently done. I really felt for the woman. I would imagine that is how it really is for the women who have been raped. I don't know if i could handle such a thing and not let it permanently bruise me either.  
 
Great job =]

Title article: Nothing Compared
Date: 2008-08-28 16:58:51

Some people write about their feelings during depression when there is no way to explain happy. Some of us have a chemical imbalance that makes us perpetually unhappy.. so your telling us to get over it and just be happy kind of reads like a slap in the face. 
 
now that said, Poetically your poem was very well written.

Title article: Haiku-Untitled
Date: 2008-08-28 16:43:05

well i've got to say that this is much better than my lemon haiku HAHAHA!  
yours really does make sense though, I got a clear picture after i read this. Good job =]

Title article: Trippy Tale
Date: 2008-08-28 16:41:01

oh goodness. this was interesting lol 
 
so lemme guess, your 'special drawer' holds some 'special stuff' that enables you to write trippy tales. funny poem/story though =]

Title article: Highly Decorated
Date: 2008-08-28 16:38:54

lol that was a nice story Phil. I hope you dont ever cheat on your sweatshirt with a sweater... haha.  
 
I think we've all got that one super-comfortable-but-not- good-enough-to-wear-out-of- the-house shirt that we only wear to the home depot and back. =]

Title article: TO AN EAGLE
Date: 2008-08-28 16:30:57

wow that was a LONG poem, but it held my interest the whole way.  
Very good imagery and comparisons. The content was great, it really made me ponder some of those things. Good work =]

Title article: Questions and Answers
Date: 2008-08-28 16:27:58

The message in this poem was good, but remember that change starts with yourself...so if individuals can't do it then it will never become a worldwide trend.  
 
Good poem =] 
Try opening your home to the 'throwaway kids'. its an interesting adventure haha.

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08/28/2008 17:28:44Re:How Do You?Off-Topic599

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Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/28/2008 16:37:12

Hahahaha thanks for sharing that information with me lemon. I'll give share some back. I've used fruit. That's right fruit. I could smoke the shit out of your lemons.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/28/2008 11:45:25

Yeah........that's what I do with it too. Tabacco.......

Oh you kids.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/26/2008 16:38:18

A hooka huh? Gee what do you do with that?

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/26/2008 11:38:34

I feel so terrible. You'd think having to work at 2 would give me plenty of time to sleep and heal right? That's so not the case here. I was up past 9A.M. at a friend's goodbye party. I just want to fall over and either die, or sleep for the rest of the day. I just thought I'd share my suffering. I miss my mattress......

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/25/2008 08:20:08

7up and brandy hmmm? Sounds a little to highclass for this farmboy. Grey Goose is delicous. And expensive. Now I want it.

Yeah getting drunk with family is pretty good. We got our mom to throw up last x-mas. She only drinks a couple times a year so it was an accomplishment we were all proud of. I have a picture of it on my phone.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/25/2008 07:39:57

lol good line with the cake. I've never had the privelage of drinking with a navy man. I've gotten drunk with a corrections officer but he was a dick. He kept bragging about all the pain he had inflicted on people. That's a good piece for a story though. Hhhmmm......

Have you ever written a story while your drunk? I'm always like, "yeah this is awesome whooooo!!!" Then the next day I'm like, "Hhhmmmm......"

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/25/2008 06:49:41

So when are you going to mail me some food lemon? I need to eat!!!

............and sleep. I got drunk last night, slept for 2 hours, and now I'm checking people out of the hotel. I'm pretty sure I'll be sober by the time I get off.

Then again I feel like death so maybe sobriety isn't what I need. Good thing this place is close to a gas station.

Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

Created On: 08/22/2008 22:21:27

Well there's gonna be a freakers ball
Tonight at the freakers hall
And you know, you're invited one and all

Come on babies grease your lips
Grab your hats and swing your hips
Don't forget to bring your whips
We're going to the freakers ball

Blow your whistle and bang your gong
Roll up something to take along
It feels so good it must be wrong
We're freakin at the freakers ball

Where all the fags and the dykes they're boogyin' together
The leather freaks are dressed in all kinds of leather
The greatest of the sadists and the masochists too
Screaming "Please hit me, and I'll hit you"

The FBI are dancing with the junkies
All the straights, are swinging with the fogies
Across the floor and up the wall
We're freakin at the freakers ball
Yall, we're freakin at the freakers ball

Everybody's kissing each other
Brother with sister, son with mother
Smear my body up with butter
Take me to the freakers ball

Pass that roach please and pour the wine
I'll kiss yours if you'll kiss mine
I'm gonna boogie till i go blind
We're freakin at the freakers ball

White ones, black ones, yellow ones, red ones
Necrophiliacs looking for dead ones
The greatest of the sadist and the masochists too
Screaming "Please hit me, and I'll hit you"

Everybody's fallin' in batches
Pyromaniacs striking matches
I'm gonna itch me where it scratches
Freaking at the freakers ball

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/22/2008 22:19:06

Puke has inspired many great stories. Use its power amie. But beware! For it might end up controlling you in the end. You must try to resist the vomits charm at all times! Otherwise........darkness awaits you.

Jason Haugh (Something Indecent)

Created On: 08/22/2008 21:46:29

Silly Max. Playing with his Kennedy Corpses.

No I haven't seen that commercial. But now I want to! Oh and by the way, my hair smells exactly how it looks. Excellent.

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