Awakening of Minds (Part One)

So there I was, looking once more at the device on the...

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Paul Harris (Bomber)
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About Myself: Married with two wonderful daughters. I have been jotting thoughts for my own amusement and sanity for about 8 years. Thought I'd have a bash more publicly.

Lots goes on inside my bean.

I live in a strange world with a somewhat rarified atmosphere. Sometimes it's fun to not be understood by people.

Sometimes I write from my daydreams, other times I write my own life.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 26, 2008The Chelsea ApartmentRomance 153
Aug 8, 20086 Minutes Until tomorrowRomance 235
Jul 24, 2008Old TomMiscellaneous Stories 131
Jul 15, 2008Because It's ThereMiscellaneous Stories 105
Jun 24, 2008The Enigma, Chapter 3Adventure 103
Jun 18, 2008The Enigma, Chapter 2Adventure 119
Jun 18, 2008The Enigma, Chapter 1Adventure 171
Apr 8, 2008The Last HeroNon-Fiction 307
Apr 3, 2008Life in a Tea CupNon-Fiction 245
Mar 18, 2008Dancing Barefoot On Hot CoalsRomance 267
Mar 7, 2008A Letter to My DadNon-Fiction 336
Mar 6, 2008RegretsRomance 671

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Title article: about that boy
Date: 2008-05-22 06:12:11
Loved the line
"down to the bottom of my feet's soft spots" 
 
That made me feel your vunerability. 
 
A sad but poignant poem.

Title article: when its over
Date: 2008-05-12 05:18:37

Captures the anguish of a failed relationship well. Looking forwards to more.

Title article: is it wrong?
Date: 2008-04-22 23:25:31

The World can seem a very big place when one is feeling lost or confused. To me, this story gets that feeling across very well. Getting those feelings "out there" by whatever means will always help. 
 
I like your work, keep writing.

Title article: Remembering Mom
Date: 2008-04-21 23:23:34

Nicely written. It's hard to find the right words to put here without appearing condescending or crass. 
 
I lost my father when I was 6, and I have posted a letter to him on here. I have photographs of him and me from when I was about 5, I can just about remember them being taken, what treasures they have turned out to be.

Title article: Trouble on Elm Street
Date: 2008-04-14 08:21:45
Another Good One
Keep them coming!

Title article: The Life of Terri Miller
Date: 2008-04-11 04:41:32
Pretty Good
Is there more of this story to come? I would certainly like to read more. 
 
Just two points... 
 
Maybe it should have been posted under "Romance". 
 
I found it a little difficult to read because the line breaks hadn't pasted correctly. 
 
Keep at it!

Title article: just a letter
Date: 2008-04-04 04:42:31

More than just a letter...

Title article: You Won't Talk to Me
Date: 2008-04-04 04:39:43

Very good, makes me feel guilty...

Title article: Picture of Daddy
Date: 2008-04-04 04:34:21

Enjoyed reading this. I hope my daugthers feel ike this when they are teenagers!!

Title article: Life in a Tea Cup
Date: 2008-04-03 21:53:06

The ironic thing about it is that the hypnotist was originally consulted for help to quit smoking! 
 
The story above was just a small part of the routine that was hit upon by chance. - Scary indeed...

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