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About Myself: If you where to ever see me, you would know I am a big old country boy who looks like he got a backwoods education, which is basically what I am currently gettin at my highschool. It is my sophmore yeeah and I write these storys cause i have to put my ideas and imagination somewhere, so this was the muddin spot

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Apr 3, 2008Death of a (Wanna) be GangstaMiscellaneous Stories 243
Mar 29, 2008Ha I gotcha Miscellaneous Stories 117
Mar 27, 2008Death of a Gangster: What IFMiscellaneous Stories 158
Mar 14, 2008Death IS hardHorror 252
Mar 14, 2008Death of a Gangster 4Miscellaneous Stories 117
Mar 9, 2008Death Of a Gangsta 3 : PoserMiscellaneous Stories 174
Mar 9, 2008Chancellor Riggin # 10: Kent DallonsAdventure 144
Mar 8, 2008Death of a Gangster 2Miscellaneous Stories 291
Mar 8, 2008Chancellor Riggin #9: A Man Named Maliya TurotoAdventure 156
Mar 7, 2008Chancellor Riggin #8: On top of Cheokee CountryAdventure 150
Mar 6, 2008Chancellor Riggin # 7 Meet The RiddilinsAdventure 143
Mar 6, 2008Chancellor Riggin #6: Reason Behind TorrisAdventure 154
Mar 5, 2008Chancellor Riggin 5: Destination ReachedAdventure 159
Mar 5, 2008Chancellor Riggin #4- The Strength of A DunAdventure 136
Mar 5, 2008How to not be SuccessfulMiscellaneous Stories 216
Mar 4, 2008Horrible Fight Miscellaneous Stories 200
Mar 4, 2008Chancellor Riggin 3: A Peaceful LifeAdventure 142
Mar 4, 2008Death of a GangstaMiscellaneous Stories 267
Mar 3, 2008Chancellor Riggin #2: Meeting Garret FeindAdventure 170
Mar 3, 2008Killing more than FleshMiscellaneous Stories 202
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Total number of comments: 9

Title article: War is Hell
Date: 2008-04-04 13:57:50

Respectafully, I disagree with Roadkill, I enjoy this story very much and enjoy the history at th begining, althogh i do beleive that you should seperate it a little more and explain. Whi is it divided? Why the war?

Title article: You Can't Unring A Bell.
Date: 2008-03-08 11:17:33

This was a good story, but to deep for my simple mind. I had to re-read several times, and am still debating the first paragraph. Overall good job

Title article: Death of a Gangsta
Date: 2008-03-05 15:43:41

I didnt mean at all to be offensive, just trying to say what i believe the chaaracter would say that point in the story

Title article: Chancellor Riggin #2: Meeting Garret Feind
Date: 2008-03-04 17:39:41

Do you believe a flashback or daydream would help

Title article: Chancellor Riggin #2: Meeting Garret Feind
Date: 2008-03-04 16:30:13
,,,
This is r.e.potter...the madness at storiesvile lives on when commenting sometimes. I have to agree with cookingwine. You have a good premise for a story but I have no feelings for your character. Maybe a prequel with a tad more insight.

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