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The Lottery

This is the story about Jack and Neal Who shook...
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About Myself: writing is simply my escape. i write mostly about what i know. that's not to say that everything i write about has happened to me, it may have just been thoughts or dreams. i don't write a poem a day, or a poem a week...sometimes i won't write for a couple months, it depends on if, when, and where i find inspiration. i don't sugar coat things and ignorance isn't bliss...so if you're looking for those happy go lucky poems i suggest going elsewhere. i appreciate ANY comments, but if you don't like piece i'd like for you to explain why. not saying that i'll change the poem, because i won't, but i'll try to think about it next time i write. well, that was probably boring so i'll end with a quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Sep 21, 20088 stories upPoetry 92
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 115
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 232
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 194
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 162
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 122
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 174
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 159
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 188
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 217
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 162
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 174
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 186
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 169
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 201
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 250
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 271
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 285
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 210
Mar 3, 2008first poem...so bare with mePoetry 323

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Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 20:22:38

oh definitely...i like johnny cash, and had nothing but respect for him...but there won't ever be anything better than the original

Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 19:54:08

those are all good as well...though all of the songs are fantastic...i don't think i've heard that version of "hurt", but i'll have to check it out...i just said the "original" version because of the johnny cash cover

Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 18:06:39

well my favorite tracks (since it's nearly impossible to pick just one) were "the becoming", "big man with a gun", and the original version of "hurt".....also, though i found it to be a bit overplayed, i liked "closer" as well....reznor is a fucking genius

Title article: Dedication
Date: 2008-08-19 23:08:54
hmmm...
is that a bit of hope i see? i must say this is my favorite out of all your poems

Title article: Postcard
Date: 2008-08-18 21:25:05

cleverly written, and the metaphors were great. this story shows that beauty truly is in the eyes of the beholder.

Title article: ?
Date: 2008-08-18 21:16:41

i may be wrong, but i believe this is the first piece of yours i've ever read...and i definitely look forward to more.

Title article: The Darkness Inside
Date: 2008-08-18 21:14:21

i think most people eventually asks themself that question, and the emotions that go along with it were well conveyed. the inconsistent rhyming made the poem, to me, better...and that is a rare thing

Title article: Some Haiku's
Date: 2008-08-18 21:11:16

i find myself reading haikus more and more, and these three were among the best. i must say the third was my favorite, it can take on many meanings (in my opinion). as far as the obvious/vague thing...i think you did a pretty good job. i could tell what you were specifically talking about, yet they could (again) take on a deeper meaning.

Title article: UNCLE Limp
Date: 2008-08-18 21:07:23

hmmm...honestly, it was ok. your poems all seem to reflect the same things, and it's almost getting old. every time i read something of yours i know what to expect...a mildly amusing account of a trait someone has.

Title article: Hoping The Sun Doesn't Rise
Date: 2008-08-18 20:58:56

the content was amazing and your flow was flawless...your poems always have intense meaning, but there was something about this that made it more powerful (and it wasn't necessarily the language)...sorry, i'm a terrible commenter so that's all i have to offer

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 Created On: 08/01/2008 14:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.
Feedback from b.k. (b.k.): lol yeah...their instrumentation was amazing on that song

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