What Kind Of God?

WHAT KIND OF GOD? By Jon Stalk...

Gabriel Visits

“What do you see when you look out at the...
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About Myself: i write because i like to, i know realistically that nothing will really ever come of it. comments are appreciated, negative ones as well, as long as they're constructive. others are, quite frankly, a waste of time. i'm worried about our world, so quite a few of my stories are based on news topics. if you like sugar-coated, ignorance is bliss, and everything will be ok poems...then you probably won't like mine.

a lot of inspiration comes from music, i would love to eventually make a couple of my poems into lyrics. some of my biggest influences are avenged sevenfold, nine inch nails, flobots, strung out, bob marley, the beatles, against me!, automatic loveletter, disturbed, and linkin park.

i guess i'll be a conformist and leave you with my favorite quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 90
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 217
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 172
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 145
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 110
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 145
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 142
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 171
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 198
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 144
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 148
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 167
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 155
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 182
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 231
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 256
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 265
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 194
Mar 3, 2008first poem...so bare with mePoetry 296

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Total number of comments: 63

Title article: after that afternoon
Date: 2008-08-26 19:10:41

i liked this...for me it had a very zen feeling to it, which i tend to like...i did get a tad bit confused though

Title article: Lemon: a Haiku
Date: 2008-08-26 19:08:36

first time i read it, i didn't care for it too much...the second time through, i liked it...funny how that works...for your first haiku it's not bad at all

Title article: Trying to Concentrate on Freedom
Date: 2008-08-26 19:01:43

amazing account of the horrors people faced in world war II...though for some reason it seemed to read more like a short story for me ...then again, that's most likely just me

Title article: Will We Meet Again?
Date: 2008-08-26 18:55:00

what happened to the glimpse of hope that we saw a couple poems back? nonetheless it's really good, the third stanza was my favorite and for some reasong it really stuck out

Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 20:22:38

oh definitely...i like johnny cash, and had nothing but respect for him...but there won't ever be anything better than the original

Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 19:54:08

those are all good as well...though all of the songs are fantastic...i don't think i've heard that version of "hurt", but i'll have to check it out...i just said the "original" version because of the johnny cash cover

Title article: downward spiral
Date: 2008-08-20 18:06:39

well my favorite tracks (since it's nearly impossible to pick just one) were "the becoming", "big man with a gun", and the original version of "hurt".....also, though i found it to be a bit overplayed, i liked "closer" as well....reznor is a fucking genius

Title article: Dedication
Date: 2008-08-19 23:08:54
hmmm...
is that a bit of hope i see? i must say this is my favorite out of all your poems

Title article: Postcard
Date: 2008-08-18 21:25:05

cleverly written, and the metaphors were great. this story shows that beauty truly is in the eyes of the beholder.

Title article: ?
Date: 2008-08-18 21:16:41

i may be wrong, but i believe this is the first piece of yours i've ever read...and i definitely look forward to more.

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 Created On: 08/01/2008 14:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.
Feedback from b.k. (b.k.): lol yeah...their instrumentation was amazing on that song

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