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About Myself: i write because i like to, i know realistically that nothing will really ever come of it. comments are appreciated, negative ones as well, as long as they're constructive. others are, quite frankly, a waste of time. i'm worried about our world, so quite a few of my stories are based on news topics. if you like sugar-coated, ignorance is bliss, and everything will be ok poems...then you probably won't like mine.

a lot of inspiration comes from music, i would love to eventually make a couple of my poems into lyrics. some of my biggest influences are avenged sevenfold, nine inch nails, flobots, strung out, bob marley, the beatles, against me!, automatic loveletter, disturbed, and linkin park.

i guess i'll be a conformist and leave you with my favorite quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 71
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 196
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 159
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 135
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 104
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 134
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 133
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 161
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 188
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 128
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 140
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 153
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 143
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 171
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 224
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 238
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 251
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 179
Mar 3, 2008first poem...so bare with mePoetry 280

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Title article: Thoughts of a Soldier
Date: 2008-07-31 06:25:59

tarhead -i personally am not a soldier, but i was speaking to some people that were. obviously i will never know how a soldier feels after coming back unless i would decide to become one. these are just some of the thoughts they expressed to me. they honestly thought they were fighting for a good reason, but once they joined a lot of different things were exposed. they obviously couldn't quit so they had to fight for a cause they no longer believed in. i simply tried to put myself in their shoes, but i will never pretend i know what the went through, or continue to go through.

Title article: Fading From Sight
Date: 2008-07-30 15:43:36

yet another great poem from the sorrowful one... 
 
but i read through the previous comments and decided to comment on those as well as the poem. 
well i must say, you're writing is far from being "nothing". you've gained many fans and much respect on this site, and while that may not be WHY you write, it shows that your writing is something. you've given people a different perspective on quite a few subjects, and that is, yet again, something. i'd really miss your poems, but obviously can't stop you if you wish to discontinue writing. it would just be a shame for the ignorance of one person to stop you from writing poetry.

Title article: I am alone - the poem, read this before the story
Date: 2008-07-30 14:47:27

i really enjoyed this, it had an aura about it...i liked the structure in which you wrote it as well, it gave it more meaning. for me, i thought the ending was good and not too short. it reminded me of an open ended novel...maybe there will be a sequel?

Title article: Tenacious Love
Date: 2008-07-30 14:39:37

what can i say that others haven't said already? i can't really think of anything, but i loved this and it was definitely a different approach than normal, and might i add, was fun to read. your poems never cease to amaze me.

Title article: Ephemeral -- A haiku cum senryu
Date: 2008-07-30 14:34:44
kudos
this is one of the best haikus i've ever read...so much meaning in such few words, i look forward to reading any of you future ones.

Title article: A Binding Constraint
Date: 2008-07-30 14:10:16

i really loved this. it seems like when most people write the longer lines, their flow suffers...but yours was simply impecable, it seemed so natural.

Title article: From My Shadow, You Are Free
Date: 2008-07-30 14:01:28

as corny as it sounds, this poem left me breathless. it was definitely a changeup from the normal suicide poem in the fact that they were trying to free someone else, and not themself. i think i'm going to have to favorite this one.

Title article: The Bald Girl
Date: 2008-07-30 13:53:46

definitely interesting, but it made me laugh. must say it was a nice change from all the depressing stuff on here.

Title article: Betrayed by a friend
Date: 2008-06-25 18:32:01

to me the poem was empty...there just really wasn't that much to it , or as a previous comment said, a "plot". it was okay, but it kind of seemed thrown together.

Title article: I Lost me Space
Date: 2008-06-18 17:21:46
brilliant!
this is definitely the best poem i've read in a really long time...then again, i always seem to enjoy your work...it's definitely worth five stars

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Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

 Created On: 08/01/2008 14:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.

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