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If The Sun Didn't Rise

IF THE SUN DIDN'T RISE BY JON STALK...
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About Myself: i write because i like to, i know realistically that nothing will really ever come of it. comments are appreciated, negative ones as well, as long as they're constructive. others are, quite frankly, a waste of time. i'm worried about our world, so quite a few of my stories are based on news topics. if you like sugar-coated, ignorance is bliss, and everything will be ok poems...then you probably won't like mine.

a lot of inspiration comes from music, i would love to eventually make a couple of my poems into lyrics. some of my biggest influences are avenged sevenfold, nine inch nails, flobots, strung out, bob marley, the beatles, against me!, automatic loveletter, disturbed, and linkin park.

i guess i'll be a conformist and leave you with my favorite quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 89
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 216
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 171
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 142
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 109
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 145
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 141
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 171
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 198
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 139
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 148
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 161
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 151
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 182
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 230
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 254
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 263
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 191
Mar 3, 2008first poem...so bare with mePoetry 295

Comments

Title article: Ouch
Date: 2008-05-26 08:44:19

good poem...one of the few on here that are more humorous than serious

Title article: The Attack
Date: 2008-05-26 08:42:23

this is definitely one of the best poems i've ever read. i loved the metaphor, it seemed to fit perfectly.

Title article: You're a Goddess.
Date: 2008-05-26 08:39:35
liked it.
but unfortunately for me it's unrealistic. for i find that when you hold a person on a high pedestal you only set yourself up for heartache and failure...then again it may just be me.

Title article: For There Is Nothing Up Above
Date: 2008-05-26 08:33:32

this is going to my favorites. there is no god, and if there is i definitely don't wish to follow him if he lets all this pain, anger, and hate into the world.

Title article: Bleeding Out the Past
Date: 2008-05-17 13:03:39

definitely going to my favorites....enjoyed this immensely....i too can relate to these feelings of betrayal and feel that you got the point across extremely well

Title article: I am my Crucifix
Date: 2008-05-17 12:59:33

loved this....most times we truly are our own worst enemies

Title article: I Feel Like Writing a Poem
Date: 2008-05-17 12:56:19

it's good to write a poem just to write one....though humorous i can definitely identify with the feelings of writer's block

Title article: Do You Love Me Still?
Date: 2008-05-17 12:49:29

ah....true love is blind

Title article: Out of a Coma— And It's Still Beating
Date: 2008-05-17 12:47:35
really really enjoyed this
i think most people feel disconnected from the world at one point in time, and it seems as if only one person can reconnect them again

Title article: My World
Date: 2008-05-17 12:45:40

you described your thoughts well, but i must agree with a previous comment...i do think it was more like a narrative....other than that, your thoughts were conveyed well

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 Created On: 08/01/2008 14:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.
Feedback from b.k. (b.k.): lol yeah...their instrumentation was amazing on that song

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