The Gift - Awakening

The night was no different than any other dark or...

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I wrote this poem and had RE Potter look it over. ...
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About Myself: i write because i like to, i know realistically that nothing will really ever come of it. comments are appreciated, negative ones as well, as long as they're constructive. others are, quite frankly, a waste of time. i'm worried about our world, so quite a few of my stories are based on news topics. if you like sugar-coated, ignorance is bliss, and everything will be ok poems...then you probably won't like mine.

a lot of inspiration comes from music, i would love to eventually make a couple of my poems into lyrics. some of my biggest influences are avenged sevenfold, nine inch nails, flobots, strung out, bob marley, the beatles, against me!, automatic loveletter, disturbed, and linkin park.

i guess i'll be a conformist and leave you with my favorite quote:
"And when the day arrives I'll become the sky and I'll become the sea and the sea will come to kiss me, for I am going home. Nothing can stop me now.”-trent reznor

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 19, 2008downward spiralPoetry 84
Jul 30, 2008Thoughts of a SoldierPoetry 212
Jun 18, 2008Dear DadPoetry 167
May 27, 2008my final truthPoetry 138
May 11, 2008Fatal UndertowPoetry 107
May 4, 2008untitled (for now)Poetry 137
Apr 23, 2008Fatally WoundedPoetry 137
Apr 13, 2008The New HolocaustPoetry 162
Apr 13, 2008Life Is No FairytalePoetry 191
Apr 11, 2008caged animalPoetry 131
Apr 10, 2008AddictPoetry 144
Apr 10, 2008I'm sorryPoetry 155
Apr 10, 2008Breaking PointPoetry 146
Mar 18, 2008just friendsPoetry 174
Mar 16, 2008our dying americaPoetry 228
Mar 10, 2008One cut too manyPoetry 244
Mar 3, 2008THE EMPTY CHAIR Poetry 252
Mar 3, 2008Inevitable DeparturePoetry 184
Mar 3, 2008first poem...so bare with mePoetry 287

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Title article: From My Shadow, You Are Free
Date: 2008-07-30 14:01:28

as corny as it sounds, this poem left me breathless. it was definitely a changeup from the normal suicide poem in the fact that they were trying to free someone else, and not themself. i think i'm going to have to favorite this one.

Title article: The Bald Girl
Date: 2008-07-30 13:53:46

definitely interesting, but it made me laugh. must say it was a nice change from all the depressing stuff on here.

Title article: Betrayed by a friend
Date: 2008-06-25 18:32:01

to me the poem was empty...there just really wasn't that much to it , or as a previous comment said, a "plot". it was okay, but it kind of seemed thrown together.

Title article: I Lost me Space
Date: 2008-06-18 17:21:46
brilliant!
this is definitely the best poem i've read in a really long time...then again, i always seem to enjoy your work...it's definitely worth five stars

Title article: I Pledge Allegiance
Date: 2008-05-27 19:08:20

finally some truth... 
and lemon, you don't have to be anti-government to oppose some of the things the corrupted people do. if it hadn't been for opposition women wouldn't be voting and slaves would still be common.

Title article: Why Do I Cry
Date: 2008-05-26 08:58:32

i really really liked this...for each girl wishes to be the other, yet the other wishes to be someone else. the message was great, keep writing!

Title article: they say
Date: 2008-05-26 08:55:29

everything seems to be blamed on mental illness these days doesn't it? i liked the poem though, and the humorous tone it had to it.

Title article: Hate
Date: 2008-05-26 08:53:00

short, yet the point was well taken. i liked the simple yet hostile mood of the poem.

Title article: The Grass is Greener
Date: 2008-05-26 08:50:56

i thought it was going to be sad throughout, but i like how it showed that there was a silver lining to the cloud. liked this alot, keep em coming

Title article: Screaming
Date: 2008-05-26 08:46:57

ah it truly is the worst thing in the world when you realize that there's absolutely no one....anyway well written, you expressed the sorrow very well

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Sorrow Is My Mask (resistanceisfreedom)

 Created On: 08/01/2008 14:41:52
Ah, your quote at the bottom.......from "La Mer" which is one of my all time favorite Nine Inch Nails instrumentals.

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