Darkening, Chapter 1

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Website/Blog: krazyreflections.blogspot.com
About Myself: I'm a 16 year old guy from Kolkata,India. Writing is my passion....although my writings were mostly limited to stories/essays as a part of school assignments,classwork and stuff like that. I've wrote for quite a few story contests...and won a few as well :) But I've only just started posting content on the net. My stories explore emotions,ethics,the darkness,the gloom,alongwith the happy and the joyous moments. It's the reflection of human nature.

Writing,to me,is a vent - for letting out all my feelings,all the pent up and supressed ones. I channelise my frustration,anger,happiness,EVERYTHING into this medium.

I hope you like my stories! :D
Have fun!

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Mar 31, 2008"...To The World You Left Behind"Science Fiction 573
Apr 28, 2008...And She Dreams Of A Better Man....Romance 1207
Mar 7, 2008A Futile MessageMiscellaneous Stories 324
May 6, 2008Ace Of SpadesAdventure 246
Feb 25, 2008Breathe No MoreMiscellaneous Stories 395
Jun 6, 2008Conversations, Chapter 1Romance 274
Jun 17, 2008Conversations, Chapter 2Miscellaneous Stories 221
Apr 19, 2008DeadMiscellaneous Stories 259
May 28, 2008MissingMiscellaneous Stories 668
Apr 9, 2008Nothing Else MattersRomance 537
Jun 28, 2008Test + Torture = TestureHorror 500
Aug 17, 2008The Morning After The WarMiscellaneous Stories 123
Mar 24, 2008The VisitorsScience Fiction 814
Feb 28, 2008UnderstandingRomance 353

Comments

Total number of comments: 21

Title article: A Date with Priya
Date: 2008-08-17 00:20:46

Oh this was really great. The last line, as almost everyone has said, drips awesomeness. In context to the story, I mean.  
 
I really liked the short, to the point sentences. Oh,for those wondering, the timeframe of this story must be a while back..judging from the Uttam Kumar reference :)  
 
Great, on the whole. 
 
P.S. Didn't know fellow bengalis to be on storiesville. Pleasant surprise :)

Title article: Test + Torture = Testure
Date: 2008-07-05 04:28:58

Thanks for reading, everyone! And for teh comments too :D 
 
@brandon_scott :- where's mr. pink btw? O_o

Title article: The Chat from Hell
Date: 2008-06-12 12:28:40

freaky!! :D and yeah - it's quite a realistic possibility O____O 
 
really liked it!  
 
keep working on stuff like this ...you're a fantastic horror writer! :D

Title article: What Am I?
Date: 2008-06-08 02:26:50

Lovely :)

Title article: Vanity(from the minds of Zombie Punk & Tarhead Mugwump)
Date: 2008-06-06 04:05:50

Content wise? SUPERB. Simply excellent! 
 
A few grammatical mistakes/sentence structure errors...but nothing too much. 
 
Great, overall!

Title article: Missing
Date: 2008-06-03 11:39:00

@ dingfriesaredone - I'm sorry..but yeah - that's the end I guess :P 
 
@ Dirkin - format errors?? O__o It looks okay to me..

Title article: Dead
Date: 2008-05-08 02:57:13

well SORRY - I'm no expert in alcohol here :D

Title article: I Want Him ....... Again
Date: 2008-05-06 10:46:04

But would she betray the one who loves her NOW? I mean..her husband? Would she break his heart?  
 
I kinda understand her situation(despite being a guy O__O )...but cheating on her husband would be NOT right.

Title article: ...And She Dreams Of A Better Man....
Date: 2008-05-02 09:25:34

rock on dude! m/

Title article: ...And She Dreams Of A Better Man....
Date: 2008-04-29 05:32:43

DL Chance said : 
"Why? What was her reason for emotionally rejecting him even as she allowed him to go on supporting her? Really, what's so wrong with this guy that the female in the story just doesn't want him? Is he too ugly? Is he too clingy? Too needy? Too...well, too loving?" 
 
Exactly! Ask HER that! She was the one who did that to ME! And I still wonder.... WHY...?

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 07/11/2008 10:53:09
Dude, your style of writing is so dark and creepy! I'm always looking forward for a new story from you.

Mugen (Dirkin)

 Created On: 05/02/2008 06:47:48
*Signs guestbook* Hey I like your stories! I also write to vent: I feel I need to vent my crazy thoughts in a permanent form like writing so I can go back and look at it!
Feedback from Prithwish (prithwish.nath): I hear ya!

Egoist (Egoist)

 Created On: 03/10/2008 20:21:40
Hey, I'm real into your stories. I'm reading through them quite slowly, but I'm enjoying every bit. I think you're a great writer.
Feedback from Prithwish (prithwish.nath): Thanks for the compliments dude...
Always great for a writer to get feedback!

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