I Will Lay In Vain

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Website/Blog: www.musingaboutnothing.blogspot.com
About Myself: "Someplace, in the grand scheme of things, this world must touch the other,"
-Cormac McCarthy.

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Aug 21, 2008Stay BackNon-Fiction 162
Aug 2, 2008As We Know ItScience Fiction 367

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Title article: A Dollar Seventy-Five and a Hot Dog
Date: 2008-07-14 22:22:25
Great
This was hilarious. You captured a mood and a character extremely well, and kept it moving.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Conversations, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-14 21:03:32

Dialogue is one of the toughest things to write, I think, so I think it's great to hammer out pieces with nothing but. 
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: manchurian candies premonitions, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-07-14 21:01:10
Different
This is different, and sometimes different is really good and sometimes it is really bad.  
 
I can't figure out which this is.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Unconscious Revenge
Date: 2008-07-14 20:58:13

I agree with Dark Romance, this seemed to be someone's fantasy and not really a story for someone else to read.  
 
In other words, I feel like Paolo the "Chinese Eyed" guy.

Title article: The Letter
Date: 2008-07-14 20:54:06
Well done
There was no filler in this, and it had a great rhythm to it, especially the first half.  
 
It felt real while reading it, and that's a great thing.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: kiss of betray
Date: 2008-07-14 20:48:06

I think the sentiment and the passion of a love lost was here, but the execution was off.  
 
You mentioned that English is your second language (in the comments), and for that reason alone you should be commended, as you write better than a good chunk of us who have been writing and speaking it our entire lives.

Title article: Honest Livings.
Date: 2008-07-04 15:21:59

I like the thought of feeling the carpet for the last time. It really becomes a part of you, not only keeping a layer of your skin cells but also for the sentimentality.  
 
“God always watches out for the drunks,” is a good line, although it makes me cringe it was one of the small details that gave the conversation a ‘real’ feel.

Title article: Last Christmas
Date: 2008-06-30 22:56:46
The End
I thought the end was really well done, and it reminded me of seeing the Challenger go down when I was a tot.  
 
Good job.

Title article: To Her Whom Cancer Took
Date: 2008-06-30 22:35:00
Good poem.
I just lost a brother-in-law to Mesothelioma. He had two young kids.  
 
Here's hoping for a cure in the near future.

Title article: Fight On!
Date: 2008-06-29 22:15:14

I think for what you are writing, and what you are aiming to do, you do it well.  
 
I may not agree, but I think your point comes across nicely.

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/30/2008 23:55:51
I'm really enjoying 'The Boy and the Buffalo' - thought it was time I signed in.

Phil
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/26/2008 18:53:11
I read your blog.
I hope you realize that the Lakers will eat the flesh of the Spurs.
Ginobli is your only real hope. Duncan isn't being as dominant as he should, and Ginobli (even though I respect the guy), pulled some lucky shots that drove momentum for them in Game 3.

Enjoy the last few games of your season, fan of the Spurs.

From LA,
-CS.
Feedback from JJ Tyler (JJtyler): Your prophecy was correct! Although the Lakers didn't fare to well in the next round.

We'll see what happens in an odd year.

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