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Website/Blog: www.musingaboutnothing.blogspot.com
About Myself: "Someplace, in the grand scheme of things, this world must touch the other,"
-Cormac McCarthy.

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Oct 11, 2008At My FuneralNon-Fiction 59
Aug 21, 2008Stay BackNon-Fiction 179
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Title article: The Appointment: a micro-fiction
Date: 2008-07-24 16:15:29

Great effort. Trying to set up the right circumstances to meet a girl, there is definite drama in that.  
 
To the guy above who ran a restaurant, coffee houses are a bit different. Some people live in there.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Old Tom
Date: 2008-07-24 16:06:17

I just wanted to second the comments on here. Compelling story and a great picture was left in my mind.  
 
Thanks again.

Title article: Stick, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-24 15:57:30

You wasted no time in getting to the meat of the story, very nice. I like the touch of the firemen having to get the body off of the railing.  
 
Keep writing and good luck.

Title article: Wall of Hate
Date: 2008-07-23 00:00:42

Good poem. This is the fourth item I've read about suicide/cutting tonight and I'm feeling a bit drained. 
 
I believe I'll go watch some Oswald, my infant daughter's favorite show. 
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Apples and Crows
Date: 2008-07-22 23:58:34

I was born in Portsmouth, and I didn't meet anything of the sort. I'm calling you out. 
 
That's Portsmouth, VA, so maybe things are different in my neck of it.

Title article: gone was the girl
Date: 2008-07-22 23:53:15

I really thought this poem was about reading a child, until I read the comments. I guess it flew over my head.  
 
I thought that when you said she would be 18 that night, that you lost her.  
 
Maybe it's just way too late.

Title article: lost boys of the sudan
Date: 2008-07-22 23:49:54

I thought this was haunting. I don't usually read poetry but what better outlet to use than one like this.  
 
I hope you personally didn't have to go through this.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-07-22 23:47:52

It's good to see how you are making readers recollect ones from their past who have had similar problems with the main character of your story.  
 
I hope there is a good ending for the girl who chose not to die on this day.

Title article: To Bleed, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-07-22 23:45:59

A dark subject is hard to make into an entertaining read, I think. Especially one as dark as this.  
 
I look forward to reading more of the story.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Legend of the Maņana, Chapter 12
Date: 2008-07-22 23:43:23

I was reading this and feeling lost, so I looked for the previous chapters on your profile page, but could not find them. 
 
I like the idea of chapters that can stand alone as stories, and maybe this works that way. I'll give it another chance.

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/30/2008 23:55:51
I'm really enjoying 'The Boy and the Buffalo' - thought it was time I signed in.

Phil
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/26/2008 18:53:11
I read your blog.
I hope you realize that the Lakers will eat the flesh of the Spurs.
Ginobli is your only real hope. Duncan isn't being as dominant as he should, and Ginobli (even though I respect the guy), pulled some lucky shots that drove momentum for them in Game 3.

Enjoy the last few games of your season, fan of the Spurs.

From LA,
-CS.
Feedback from JJ Tyler (JJtyler): Your prophecy was correct! Although the Lakers didn't fare to well in the next round.

We'll see what happens in an odd year.

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