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Website/Blog: www.justyler.blogspot.com
About Myself: Looking to write and make people laugh, so that they spit out various liquids on various objects.

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Jul 23, 2008The Boy and the BuffaloMiscellaneous Stories 52

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Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/26/2008 18:53:11
I read your blog.
I hope you realize that the Lakers will eat the flesh of the Spurs.
Ginobli is your only real hope. Duncan isn't being as dominant as he should, and Ginobli (even though I respect the guy), pulled some lucky shots that drove momentum for them in Game 3.

Enjoy the last few games of your season, fan of the Spurs.

From LA,
-CS.
Feedback from JJ Tyler (JJtyler): Your prophecy was correct! Although the Lakers didn't fare to well in the next round.

We'll see what happens in an odd year.

Comments

Title article: Me Interrupted.
Date: 2008-07-22 23:26:52
Chaos
I'm not sure if the person who asks the bathroom questions should be around children in the first place. 
 
Way to keep it interesting.

Title article: MAVIS
Date: 2008-07-22 23:25:00

I thought the characters were over the top in a good way, but we never got to the part of the actual story. 
 
This seemed to be all back story, waiting for the action to happen.  
 
I to see talent here though.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: The Exorcism of Oprah Winfrey
Date: 2008-07-22 23:10:14

It takes some imagination and guts to go after such a celebrity and queen of our day.  
 
You're basically the Sex Pistols of storieville.

Title article: Day of Revelation
Date: 2008-07-22 23:03:26
Good slow pitch
This one caught me off guard. I thought it was going to be a Left Behind short story.  
 
Good job, and keep writing. 
 
LOL at Alfred telling war stories on a comment page.

Title article: Growth
Date: 2008-07-22 22:59:22

I feel like a shower after this one. And I think that's what you wanted to make the reader feel: so dang good job on that. 
 
Others seem to be mentioning the format, and I know that can come from pasting from other programs at times.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Days of End (Mans past...Mans future ), Chapter 3
Date: 2008-07-22 22:53:30
Enjoyed
Enjoyed it like I did the first two. I'm interested to see where the story will take us.  
 
What brings all things to death? 
 
A lot of the fun is in the guessing.  
 
Keep writing and good luck.

Title article: Packing It All In
Date: 2008-07-22 22:48:40

My wife and 7 month old were recently stopped for the babies diaper cream. If we have babies trying to get explosive diaper cream on planes, we've already lost the war.

Title article: Yardwork
Date: 2008-07-22 22:44:49
Wow
This started as a sweet trip down memory lane and then morphed into an outlet of grief.  
 
I started getting mad when the author began complaining of his upbringing, and then he brought it to present day, and I had to think of his feelings in a different way. 
 
Good job.

Title article: Flowers on the Wall
Date: 2008-07-22 22:36:14

Wallpaper has always creeped me out, with the repetitive patterns and the happy characters it has at times.  
 
I'm glad we don't have any here, or I might have regretted reading your poem. 
 
Good luck, and keep writing.

Title article: Fulcrums
Date: 2008-07-21 12:28:16

"My stomach drops a hands width within me and I feel my manhood shrivel to nothing through the force of my fear upon hearing this."--this is clunky and doesn't feel natural. Wouldn't actually hear someone else say this. It sounds like someone trying to write something too hard, and not a part of the story.  
 
That's one example. Again, I enjoyed this story, and it this seems like nik picking, then it probably is.  
 
Good luck again.

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