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Website/Blog: www.musingaboutnothing.blogspot.com
About Myself: "Someplace, in the grand scheme of things, this world must touch the other,"
-Cormac McCarthy.

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Oct 11, 2008At My FuneralNon-Fiction 59
Aug 21, 2008Stay BackNon-Fiction 179
Aug 2, 2008As We Know ItScience Fiction 380

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Title article: A Story for Hannah
Date: 2008-07-28 22:23:14

As a narrator I've been served papers several times by my characters.

Title article: The Tall Tales Of Chris
Date: 2008-07-28 22:19:46

It could use some work, but I loved this line:  
 
"But something happened in that toilet." 
 
That alone was worth the price of admission.

Title article: Testing My Pencil
Date: 2008-07-28 22:13:21

It made me laugh on the inside, which is all that counts.  
 
Talking to inanimate objects isn't too much of a problem. The problem comes when they talk back.

Title article: Behind Blue Eyes, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-28 22:06:29

Wow, SageSyren really said it well. I don't think I can say anything more than I like where you are going, but the pacing seemed somewhat quick because we didn't get the full picture.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: The Questador, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-28 19:45:56

I thought it jumped around a lot too. Take your time. Keep writing and good luck.

Title article: my swim
Date: 2008-07-26 10:51:23
Disturbing
I think that's what you were going for, so good job.

Title article: Stick - The Final Reckoning, Chapter 5
Date: 2008-07-26 10:27:45
Great Story
I am left with some questions, but I think that's how you wanted it. 
 
Very well done.

Title article: Stick, Chapter 3
Date: 2008-07-26 10:18:47
Agreed
I agree with all three above. This story has a good pace, enough details to provide the realism needed, and a mysterious element to it that keeps you wanting more.  
 
Good job, again.

Title article: Stick, Chapter 2
Date: 2008-07-26 10:12:06

What appeared to be just a bizarre murder mystery in chapter 1, gets more depth in chapter 2.  
 
How far are we willing to go for revenge? I think it's an excellent question to deal with in this format.  
 
Good writing, good story. I'm off to read chapter 3.

Title article: Peanut Butter and Doom
Date: 2008-07-26 09:46:47
Insanity
Very well done. I've never had that much hesitation when it comes to food.  
 
Keep writing and good luck.

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Philip Neale (philneale1952)

Derbyshire, England
 Created On: 07/30/2008 23:55:51
I'm really enjoying 'The Boy and the Buffalo' - thought it was time I signed in.

Phil
Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/26/2008 18:53:11
I read your blog.
I hope you realize that the Lakers will eat the flesh of the Spurs.
Ginobli is your only real hope. Duncan isn't being as dominant as he should, and Ginobli (even though I respect the guy), pulled some lucky shots that drove momentum for them in Game 3.

Enjoy the last few games of your season, fan of the Spurs.

From LA,
-CS.
Feedback from JJ Tyler (JJtyler): Your prophecy was correct! Although the Lakers didn't fare to well in the next round.

We'll see what happens in an odd year.

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