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Frantic, Chapter 1

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Website/Blog: www.geekedforbooks.blogspot.com
About Myself: Looking to write and make people laugh, so that they spit out various liquids on various objects.

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DateTitleCategoryHits
Jul 16, 2008CausesMiscellaneous Stories 77
Jul 9, 2008Pain at the PumpHumor 111
Jul 3, 2008A Purple Dusk, Chapter 1Science Fiction 99
Jun 27, 2008A Purple Dusk, Chapter 0Science Fiction 277
Jun 19, 2008I Need to Talk to YouHumor 384
Jun 5, 2008A Bad Answer for Writer's BlockHumor 203
May 23, 2008OrangeMiscellaneous Stories 339
May 7, 2008Where The Heck Are The Lasers?Non-Fiction 229
Feb 24, 2008The Meeting PlaceHorror 332
Feb 20, 2008The Insurance SalesmanMystery 464
Feb 16, 2008As We Know ItScience Fiction 283

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Nunyo Bidness (cookingWine)

 Created On: 05/26/2008 18:53:11
I read your blog.
I hope you realize that the Lakers will eat the flesh of the Spurs.
Ginobli is your only real hope. Duncan isn't being as dominant as he should, and Ginobli (even though I respect the guy), pulled some lucky shots that drove momentum for them in Game 3.

Enjoy the last few games of your season, fan of the Spurs.

From LA,
-CS.
Feedback from JJ Tyler (JJtyler): Your prophecy was correct! Although the Lakers didn't fare to well in the next round.

We'll see what happens in an odd year.

Comments

Total number of comments: 67

Title article: Unavoidable Detours Created By The Elderly.
Date: 2008-07-14 22:33:41

You're like an scene photographer. You take a scene that is meaningful in it's own way and take a snap shot of it, and it turns out to be a good look into someone's life.  
 
There's a realism in your stories.  
 
Just the other day I had an old timer asking me why I used a debit card to buy my diet mountain dew at the Exxon. Just came out and asked it.  
 
Thanks for the story, keep writing.

Title article: A Dollar Seventy-Five and a Hot Dog
Date: 2008-07-14 22:22:25
Great
This was hilarious. You captured a mood and a character extremely well, and kept it moving.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Conversations, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-14 21:03:32

Dialogue is one of the toughest things to write, I think, so I think it's great to hammer out pieces with nothing but. 
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: manchurian candies premonitions, Chapter 4
Date: 2008-07-14 21:01:10
Different
This is different, and sometimes different is really good and sometimes it is really bad.  
 
I can't figure out which this is.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: Unconscious Revenge
Date: 2008-07-14 20:58:13

I agree with Dark Romance, this seemed to be someone's fantasy and not really a story for someone else to read.  
 
In other words, I feel like Paolo the "Chinese Eyed" guy.

Title article: The Letter
Date: 2008-07-14 20:54:06
Well done
There was no filler in this, and it had a great rhythm to it, especially the first half.  
 
It felt real while reading it, and that's a great thing.  
 
Good luck and keep writing.

Title article: kiss of betray
Date: 2008-07-14 20:48:06

I think the sentiment and the passion of a love lost was here, but the execution was off.  
 
You mentioned that English is your second language (in the comments), and for that reason alone you should be commended, as you write better than a good chunk of us who have been writing and speaking it our entire lives.

Title article: The Rainy Day Man
Date: 2008-07-14 20:44:34

Little Abner had a character who always walked around with a cloud over his or her head, and this is very symbolic of depression, bad luck, a negative outlook.  
 
It's good to see two people with the similar circumstances can hook up. Opposites don't always attract.  
 
Keep writing and good luck.

Title article: The Love That Was Never To Have Been
Date: 2008-07-14 20:40:16

If I had any advice, it would be about showing and not telling. Most of this story is explaining the backdrop, except for the dialogue. Telling us what's happening is not the same as creating a place where we can watch it happen.  
 
But, what do I know? 
 
Keep writing and good luck.

Title article: A Purple Dusk, Chapter 0
Date: 2008-07-09 08:26:22
Thanks
Thanks for pulling that sentence out. It's funny how you read something 5 times and don't catch something off as that, but when you isolate it, it looks so funky.  
 
I cut it all together.

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