There Is Only One Star, Chapter 4

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About Myself: Born 1968, engineering Manager, love Horror stories esp. zombie and "end of the world". Born in Glasgow but now live in London, kids have gone so just my good lady and I. We also just got two puppy dalmations- now they are real horrors! The Church is the first thing I have written since school.

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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 10, 2008The Church Part 10- The Sickness, Chapter 10Horror 79
Jul 29, 2008E.M.P, Chapter 1Science Fiction 99
Jul 14, 2008Behind Blue Eyes, Chapter 1Mystery 146
Jul 14, 2008The Church Part 9- Working Together, Chapter 9Horror 79
May 2, 2008The Church- Part 8- We must try for peaceHorror 174
Apr 8, 2008The Master Plan- Part 1Science Fiction 162
Apr 5, 2008The Church- Part 7- The Beginning of the EndHorror 177
Mar 30, 2008The Church- Part 6- Let the Battle commenceHorror 200
Mar 27, 2008The Life of a FlowerMiscellaneous Stories 201
Mar 24, 2008If I could turn back timeMiscellaneous Stories 281
Mar 20, 2008The Church- Part 5- Meeting of MindsHorror 215
Mar 19, 2008The Last MinuteMiscellaneous Stories 382
Mar 18, 2008Hastings HospitalMystery 286
Mar 12, 2008The Church- Part 4- The ReturnHorror 251
Feb 23, 2008The Church- Part 3- The Search BeginsHorror 253
Feb 16, 2008The Church- Part 2- The Order of thingsHorror 259
Feb 15, 2008JulieHorror 367
Feb 13, 2008The ChurchHorror 456

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Title article: Clichés (part 1)
Date: 2008-03-18 15:08:32
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enjoyed that, looking forward to the next one

Title article: our dying america
Date: 2008-03-16 13:02:25
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A good angry poem, I am from The United Kingdom and this means just the same for us.

Title article: The Wrong Turn
Date: 2008-03-15 13:17:45
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I like the open ending, people can decide for themselves what is going to happen. Well done.

Title article: Last Words
Date: 2008-03-15 13:01:47
Good story
Good story, enjoyed reading it.

Title article: Child of the Plague
Date: 2008-03-15 10:14:53
Very good
Great story but the thought of sex with a zombie makes me feel sick. I wonder what the baby will turn out like? Will you be doing a follow up?

Title article: Brown Goo
Date: 2008-03-15 08:52:32
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Very good, could picture it all, well done

Title article: Death IS hard
Date: 2008-03-15 04:19:55
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Well done. A fine story, shows how easy it is for some people to disregard life and death. One slight gripe, should the line in the last paragraph not read "life is hard but death is easy"?

Title article: Unpresentative
Date: 2008-03-14 13:01:52
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I enjoyed the style and pace of the story but think some questions were unanswered. Why wait until they were together two years, whats in the box? As i stated i enjoyed it but it could have been even better. Well done, John

Title article: Only Human
Date: 2008-03-13 10:39:31
Very good
I really enjoyed that evfen if I dont know much about poetry. I found it sad but full of hope, well done.

Title article: The Church- Part 3- The Search Begins
Date: 2008-02-27 16:58:15
Thanks
Thanks for the kind words, sorry about my poor grammer- I must work on that! I am slightly worried that each chapter is too long, would smaller bites, if you excuse the pun, be better?

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03/26/2008 18:18:52Re:My ArtworkOff-Topic225
03/24/2008 16:05:35Re:Hi everybodyOff-Topic1981
03/22/2008 05:50:26Re:The idea of poetry....Off-Topic599
03/20/2008 18:05:22The idea of poetry....Off-Topic599

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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 07/10/2008 09:57:53
dude, the Church fucking rules!
Christian Wright (The 13th)

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 Created On: 04/11/2008 12:41:21
Love your stories mate.Got to say hastings hospital and the church are my favourite.Not quite sure about your football team choice but you cant be perfect.

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