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john mccuaig (celtic1888)
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About Myself: Born 1968, engineering Manager, love Horror stories esp. zombie and "end of the world". Born in Glasgow but now live in London, kids have gone so just my good lady and I. We also just got two puppy dalmations- now they are real horrors! The Church is the first thing I have written since school.

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Aug 10, 2008The Church Part 10- The Sickness, Chapter 10Horror 103
Jul 29, 2008E.M.P, Chapter 1Science Fiction 108
Jul 14, 2008Behind Blue Eyes, Chapter 1Mystery 154
Jul 14, 2008The Church Part 9- Working Together, Chapter 9Horror 101
May 2, 2008The Church- Part 8- We must try for peaceHorror 178
Apr 8, 2008The Master Plan- Part 1Science Fiction 166
Apr 5, 2008The Church- Part 7- The Beginning of the EndHorror 182
Mar 30, 2008The Church- Part 6- Let the Battle commenceHorror 206
Mar 27, 2008The Life of a FlowerMiscellaneous Stories 206
Mar 24, 2008If I could turn back timeMiscellaneous Stories 288
Mar 20, 2008The Church- Part 5- Meeting of MindsHorror 220
Mar 19, 2008The Last MinuteMiscellaneous Stories 384
Mar 18, 2008Hastings HospitalMystery 290
Mar 12, 2008The Church- Part 4- The ReturnHorror 257
Feb 23, 2008The Church- Part 3- The Search BeginsHorror 260
Feb 16, 2008The Church- Part 2- The Order of thingsHorror 267
Feb 15, 2008JulieHorror 369
Feb 13, 2008The ChurchHorror 463

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Title article: The Church- Part 6- Let the Battle commence
Date: 2008-04-03 13:20:09
Thanks
Thanks for all your comments, glad its being enjoyed. I have two threads for the journey to the end of the story but I cant decide which one to use! Will start the next chapter over the weekend, thanks once again. John

Title article: World Wide Web Cam
Date: 2008-04-01 12:38:05
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Great story, builds up the tension levels very well. Shows the hopelessness of being so far away when a loved one is being hurt.

Title article: no remorse
Date: 2008-04-01 12:31:53
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A good interesting story but as noted earlier could have done with either the reason why he did it the same as the ripper or why no remorse. Still an enoyable read, well done.

Title article: The shadow of the past.
Date: 2008-04-01 09:27:45
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Very difficult to read due to the poor spelling and grammar but this seems a shame as I feel it could have been good. A bit more practice on your english Gonzalo is required.

Title article: This Night in the Blood
Date: 2008-03-31 12:17:07
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I also didnt understand it but thats a shame as it seems interesting.

Title article: bridge monster
Date: 2008-03-31 11:42:41
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Must admit I didnt really understand this but that might just be me.

Title article: "...To The World You Left Behind"
Date: 2008-03-31 11:39:39
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Nice simple story but did think the armies gave in a bit too easy but still good

Title article: darkness
Date: 2008-03-31 03:27:33
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i think the best way forward would be to expalain where they are going, what is the danger and why they must risk it. It could be famine has spread over the land and due to hunger they must get to the coast or wherever. The danger could be some people have turned to eating others just to survive and this group is being hunted. This is just my opinion and may be a bit much but hopefully it will you some ideas

Title article: Trolleys (Rewritten)
Date: 2008-03-30 13:43:05
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A fine story, I enjoyed it. Only little problem is that some of the sentences are a bit too long, the first for example.

Title article: finishing the job
Date: 2008-03-30 06:47:11
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Good quick story but needed some more info about the killer, why did he kill her parents and why did he wait 15years to kill her?

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03/24/2008 16:05:35Re:Hi everybodyOff-Topic2036
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Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 Created On: 07/10/2008 09:57:53
dude, the Church fucking rules!
Christian Wright (The 13th)

Wicklow
 Created On: 04/11/2008 12:41:21
Love your stories mate.Got to say hastings hospital and the church are my favourite.Not quite sure about your football team choice but you cant be perfect.

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