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COME INTO MY ARMS - The Arrival, Chapter 1

Sophia saw the new arrival from her bedroom...

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Total number of comments: 69

Title article: One for the Road
Date: 2008-06-28 12:06:26

Its weird,,but I didn't mind this. valiant effort.

Title article: Better Day Tomorrow
Date: 2008-06-28 12:01:57

This story does not need sunshine, some stories are blue in nature. If all stories had sunshine, we wouldn't have Misery or The shining by Stephen King,,and countless other classics. Not saying this ranks as a classic, but it was pretty damn good.

Title article: I will forget
Date: 2008-06-28 11:56:10

This was quick and simple but I really liked it...it had meaning.

Title article: Detached
Date: 2008-06-28 11:51:29

sorry, but i feel a little detached from this poem. Didn't quite understand

Title article: July Wind
Date: 2008-06-27 18:24:19
giving it a 4
Didn't mind it, thought it was kinda good. Not that I really undersatnd it, but it read well. Im not sure, well, yes I am, but sub consciousness is one word.

Title article: Days of End (a journey of man), Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-27 18:16:51

I couldn't begin to say it as gracfully as Amatayo, but this is actually a cool idea for a story. I'll keep my eye's peeled for the next one.

Title article: Our Parting
Date: 2008-06-11 07:12:04
ok
Love. It hurts so bad when it leaves you. Didn't get the end of this lil poem however. It sounded like you had parted ways for good in the beginning, only to leave the reader wondering if that was the case... or was she only telling herself that he would be back...dunno,,anyway, not bad.

Title article: Coffee Stains, Chapter 1
Date: 2008-06-11 07:05:34
what
What I don't understand is how you can be such a know-it-all reviewer and never apply it to your own stories. 
 
This story made no sense at all, especially the end paragraph. I would say this story was intended to be poorly written which I then say...great job.

Title article: You're The One
Date: 2008-06-09 16:06:46

ok, its obvious this song was written for me... gosh, im blushing, but I gotta be free baby, i told you that.

Title article: Waiting Petals
Date: 2008-06-09 16:01:32
found one
This was good. But from you, anything less would be unacceptable....grand job.

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