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Member Since	02/11/2008 03:54:02
Last Online	05/03/2008 10:19:34
Last Updated	03/01/2008 14:58:59
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Hi, I'm just starting out in writing. Looking for feedback and tips.

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Date	Subject	Category	Hits
03/24/2008 13:23:37	not a bad guy	Off-Topic	95
03/18/2008 11:00:36	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	17341
03/12/2008 05:35:22	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	17341
03/11/2008 14:50:57	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	17341
03/10/2008 17:43:47	Re:What's inside your noggin?	Off-Topic	17341
02/11/2008 13:45:03	Re:Tarhead Mugwumps Thread	Off-Topic	15769

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CS (cookingWine) Send Email	Created On: 03/24/2008 06:58:22 I enjoy your critique's. I'd appreciate any feedback, in detail, you have for any/all of my stories.

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Total number of comments: 39

Title article: The Chat from Hell
Date: 2008-03-24 12:07:56

this is called 'storiesville'...just checking.

Title article: Help me.
Date: 2008-03-24 12:05:04

help me ,,understand
the most discussed? boy aren't we a bright bunch.

Title article: WHO KISSED WHOM.
Date: 2008-03-24 11:49:27

what a slut...kidding. I don't know what to say about this poem. Can't decide if it was ok or not ok...ill give it a C...wait, i'll give you the benifit of the doubt ,,C+

Title article: Sad Sara
Date: 2008-03-24 11:44:28

im liking
This could have been more like a story, though I enjoyed it all the same as a poem. My only desertion of this piece is that Father McCabe wouldn't have been so bold as to pull another girl into his office so quickly by just seeing her there at his door. Atleast I would think so,,,but it is just a poem,,,a rather good one at that.

Title article: Eternity Is A Very Long Time
Date: 2008-03-24 11:33:52

talking tree's,,,ok
Rather simple indeed, not that im expecting to read Salmon Rushdie on here. A child story told on sesame street is where this would be most suited. Not bad for the age group you must have intended this for.

Title article: Mirror
Date: 2008-03-24 11:23:30

didn't understand.

Title article: This Title; Alfred, Has Something To Do With The Story
Date: 2008-03-24 05:12:50

haha
This story made no sense... nothing out of the norm there. The title again made no sense, even if it seems directed at me. It also seems you have a big/small inferior complex...something doctors can fix these days; so i've read. You should focus more attention on creative story telling then focusing all of it on my comment about a nonsensical story you wrote.

Title article: Trolleys
Date: 2008-03-23 09:25:45

hmmm
That last comment was from me..alfred.

Title article: Snow White
Date: 2008-03-23 09:10:09

guessing
I guess your talking bout life,,,but I can't be sure.

Title article: anew
Date: 2008-03-23 09:07:56

last sentence
Im glad your not lost,,,cause I am.

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