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Member Since 02/11/2008
Last Online 08/26/2008
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About Myself: Children of this site... its past your bed time.

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Title article: The deer's have eyez (Poorly written grammar story), Chapter 1
Date: 2008-07-11 10:27:55

No dont rewrite ..burn. Dude, I just read something great,,,then I stumble on this,,,thanks for the let down.

Title article: Days of End (Mans past...Mans future ), Chapter 3
Date: 2008-07-11 10:25:11

Damn your good dude. Just reread entire story again. One of my fav's on here no doubt. You have a great mind at story telling. Keep it up.

Title article: Blind
Date: 2008-07-11 10:10:39
so so
Its funny that right above your poem about God, is a advertisment about penis reduction.

Title article: Confession
Date: 2008-07-09 13:28:16

10th grade, I would have guessed 7th. This was just stupid the way it was written, I have no emotional connection with this guy, or could I give a shit about the reporter. Show me character build up dude.

Title article: The Letter
Date: 2008-07-09 13:16:23

This kinda story has been done so much now I wanna kill myself. Would you all cry for me? A guy feeling guilty from causing his wife to kill herself. been there done that.

Title article: Nihility
Date: 2008-07-09 13:11:33
got one
It had a nice poetic flow. I liked it.

Title article: Sightless Sight
Date: 2008-07-09 13:01:00

Frgot flasses, will tru to get tgrough vomment as bast i cam. It was ok, bit it didmt do notting fot me,,,jesis,,wjere are mu mothet fickimg classes

Title article: Driving Ms. Daisy
Date: 2008-07-09 12:53:42

Lordy lordy miz daisy, you sho lookin fine taday lord. now leme goes runs off and drawz that bath for ya...ooooh we. Gonna cleanz ya up nice indeed. Oh i be so sorry miz daisy,,seems i done triped over one of yo boobs.

Title article: I'll Be Stuck In Pain
Date: 2008-07-09 12:48:09

why is this guy so screwed up anyway. Pain in pain out..clap on clap off...easy as that.

Title article: a friend to zombies
Date: 2008-07-09 12:44:29

eh, not very well written. Reminded me of story done for school when you were in 6th grade. Just kinda dumb.

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Last 10 Forum Posts
DateSubjectCategoryHits
07/09/2008 13:18:03Re:Ways to Annoy PeopleOff-Topic3480
07/08/2008 21:57:32Re:Does anyone write in long hand anymore?Off-Topic412
06/27/2008 18:12:40Re:MusicOff-Topic2473
06/01/2008 21:45:45Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?Off-Topic2305
06/01/2008 21:29:41Re:stupid offensive jokes anybody?Off-Topic2305
03/24/2008 13:23:37not a bad guyOff-Topic194
03/18/2008 11:00:36Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic35824
03/12/2008 05:35:22Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic35824
03/11/2008 14:50:57Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic35824
03/10/2008 17:43:47Re:What's inside your noggin?Off-Topic35824

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Christian Wright (The 13th)

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 Created On: 07/14/2008 12:07:46
I know I'm gonna regret this because one day youre gonna slag off my story.But your comments crack me up.

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