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Arlii Hackbarth (Arlii)
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Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
May 28, 2008Though the night is longMiscellaneous Stories 105
Apr 16, 2008Selfish Love?Poetry 82
Apr 14, 2008A Child-like PrayerPoetry 108
Apr 14, 2008My OfferPoetry 106
Apr 14, 2008A Salute to SoldiersPoetry 76
Apr 13, 2008To those in painPoetry 94
Apr 13, 2008Will you?Poetry 78
Apr 13, 2008Heartbreak and HealingPoetry 102
Apr 11, 2008Bearable Heartache, Livable PainPoetry 119
Feb 18, 2008"Can we keep her?"Miscellaneous Stories 233
Feb 10, 2008Dreams and RainstormsRomance 196
Feb 5, 2008The BurdenMiscellaneous Stories 161
Feb 5, 2008Children of SorrowMiscellaneous Stories 189

Comments

Total number of comments: 7

Title article: The Cost of True Love (My First Short Story)
Date: 2008-04-28 15:28:21
Interesting use of techinique
Good job for a first time. 
Your techinque of switching Point of View is interesting and keeps the reader thinking (something sorely lacking in many romance stories) and helps create a sort of web between the characters.  
Very nice for a first story. Fine tune your art. Try rewriting it a few times. It worked for Hemingway...

Title article: It's okay to cry
Date: 2008-04-26 17:00:48
Is this true?
If it isn't, then you have a masterful craft on your hands.  
If it is, then you have a wonderful message and ministry.

Title article: MY SECRET FRIEND
Date: 2008-04-13 11:05:13
A little gross but good style.
You have an interesing style.  
I like the techinique. Bu the only thing that I would suggest is be careful with the little boy and the "Special Friend" thing.  
It is very questionable in today's society...

Title article: Render me Helpless
Date: 2008-02-13 20:53:27
Could be promising...
Seems a little like a soap opera. Though, the romance genre lends itself towards that easily. 
She seems to be an in-depth character. But what are her motivations? Why does her mother put up with it all? 
What about Jesse? I am assuming the savior is him, though I would love to be pleasently surprised.  
I think I will keep an eye on this one, to see if it fulfils the potential I see here.

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