Love Crawls Down the Drain

I can't believe she broke up with me! After five years...

TO WHOM IT MIGHT CONCERN (Gambia Oct '08)

It is not all fun being invisible, not all about...
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About Myself: I am an eighteen-year-old girl from a freezing and cold country called Finland. I like to imagine, and sometimes I let my imagination draw sceneries to a piece of paper, and that's how the stories come up...

I'm sorry if my stories contain mistakes or some words that might not be the best for the places they are, but I hope you understand the fact that English isn't my mother tongue. I encourage you to report about the worst mistakes, and maybe by that I'll become a better writer. Thanks!

And please, comment on my stories, or at least rate them! I'd like to know what do people think about them.

I don't have so much time to read stories here, but when I have, I often choose stories written by authors who have commented on my stories. So that might be a good reason for giving some comments to me...

Stories


Published Short Stories

 
DateTitleCategoryHits
Feb 23, 2008The man who lost for the last timeScience Fiction 294
Feb 10, 2008Was it all that Black-and-white? - Part 2Science Fiction 265
Feb 9, 2008Was it all that Black-and-white? - Part 1Science Fiction 288
Apr 11, 2008The Mute GuitaristMiscellaneous Stories 228
Feb 10, 2008Escape through the windowPoetry 237
Feb 14, 2008The Last LetterNon-Fiction 392

Comments

Total number of comments: 18

Title article: The Mute Guitarist
Date: 2008-04-12 03:07:06

Hey, thanks for the tip! I actually came to think about the same thing myself when I was writing this, but I just couldn't make up a good beginning, so I got frustrated and left it like that... :)

Title article: The Mute Guitarist
Date: 2008-04-12 03:03:10

Ohio? I don't know where did you get that from... :) I guess she probably lives somewhere around Finland, but I'm not sure. Haven't asked about it... 
And the guy is only mute, btw.

Title article: Dial 000
Date: 2008-03-01 05:31:48

Well, this was pretty amusing, yes. Maybe I didn't like the ending so much, 'cos I waited for something unhappier, but it was still okay. At least this one is something... something different. It's good.

Title article: I Don’t Pick Up Hitchhikers Anymore
Date: 2008-03-01 05:21:14
Oh dammit...
I just somehow knew what was the nature of this story, from the second paragraph, and it's irritating. This is well written, and it IS unpredictable, but still I failed to be surprised at the end. And I feel ashamed beacause of it; I would've wanted to tell that I had no idea about the ending, but, oh well, I just went and guessed the whole ingenius twist far too early. 
 
I'll give it a 5 still, 'cos I think this really is well written. And I guess I'll add this to my favourites, too...

Title article: The man who lost for the last time
Date: 2008-02-26 07:26:02

Thanks for the tip! I checked the story with Word at school [I don't have it at home], and now the spellings should be correct. But I want to notify that there are some mistakes that are done in purose, and they are the ones in the spoken parts and in the letter at the end. I guess that this might have come to mind even otherwise, but I wanted to make it sure stil... 
 
:)

Title article: The man who lost for the last time
Date: 2008-02-23 05:13:32
notifications...
I've never been to Vegas, nor I've never gambled, either, so I apologize if there's something that's sounds unreal about them. 
 
I hope it's still enjoyable. I spent two hours writing this, on the floor, in the middle of the night, and yes, with a pencil and a paper. I'm glad I did so. 
 
But I'll let you judge wheter you like it or not. At least rate it, if you don't have time to write a comment. Thanks..

Title article: Was it all that Black-and-white? - Part 2
Date: 2008-02-16 11:33:30

Thanks again, Dirkin, for your wonderful comment. :) 
 
I'm not actually sure myself, about where this story comes from, because it's based on a dream I had the other night. I do see weird dreams, though part of this story is really made up... 
 
But maybe everyone can decide the meaning of it themselves. I don't know about the halloween thing; we don't celebrate it traditionally here, either... 
 
Well, I wonder the same thing myself... It wasn't in my dream, so I can't be sure about what happened to Spark... But I guess that everyone has an opinion about it; what would you think if your daughter came back home all black and white? :) 
 
But thanks for the support, once more!

Title article: Sell Your Soul and be Saved
Date: 2008-02-14 10:15:59

Why, this was pretty funny story, though at first it seemed to be something else. 
 
The style of this stroy was wonderful; I liked it. 
 
The only thing that remained nagging was that the climax of the stroy came a bit too fast. Or maybe I read too fast, I don't know. Still it felt like 'hey, what, it ended already?', and I had to read the ending again. 
 
But that's not bad. This was after all a very pleasant story to read.

Title article: The Last Letter
Date: 2008-02-14 09:59:57
Some food of thought...
There was something that referred to this on the forum, and I've also been thinking the same subject myself sometimes... 
 
How could I know if for example my penfriend dies, if no one else knows about the correspondence? Or someone I know only over the Internet? 
 
It's creepy...

Title article: Magnets
Date: 2008-02-12 12:37:31

This is a nice poem, yes.. Though I find it pretty unnatural when the lines are sometimes divided like that; from between a sentence. It is so with both English and Finnish, and I guess in any language. 
Still it's very nicely said, and it's made like an open letter, but yet it doesen't consider things too personal; it could be for anyone from anyone. But after all it is as important for both sides, who ever they were.

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